I've now read these both multiple times. Both are pretty good, and they both delve into the realm of fantasy.
Candy's verse intrigued me. I thought the ending left a little to be desired after that buildup but it's still pretty good.
Scar's was an interesting read as well, complete with a main character and a world full of hazards. I don't see how it relates to the picture at all, which, for me, docks it a little.
There is a book in the picture and I think that's where Candy went with it.
Both pieces have 1 or 2 slight grammatical errors.
Anyway, it's not just topic alone; I just think Candy's verse strung me along-- being interested a little more.
V Candy
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