This was hard to vote on I was going to vote on it first but didn't. Zelph did not come very hard and Obj has a bit of a culture transition from topicals. I really liked reading Obj's verse but it wasn't exactly direct enough. There were some good parts that made me laugh but i would have enjoyed it more with a bit mor structure and harshness.
Zelph had decent material imo that he didn't fully capitalize on in a whole. There were def highlights, hairlip and strap were pretty good and I liked a couple others but the misses were crucial.
It's almost a draw in my mind but this is a tourney and I gotta lean towards Obj. It just read better to me, the only gripes i had were set in tradition and that's not what my votes are based on. Zelph could have won this pretty easily tho.
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