beats pretty dope
don't like the delivery or lyrics tho but im gonna wait til the hook. bar before the hook was cool, good transition. hooks aight. i like it the second time through better for whatever reason. second verse starts better. beat drop is nice. basically the production is carrying this song for me. you sound dope sometimes then other times its just too simple. second verse ended cool. hook grows on me but i think your presence was low in the start and then at other times it came through. but if i didnt know you i'd turn it off after the first bar so open it up doper
up your pen game a little, play with the flows more often
if you started the first verse better i think it would have some appeal overall
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