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Old 06-18-2015, 12:52 AM   #3
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Oats! Good shit bruh its been a long time since I've seen you drop in here
its always nice to see some of the older heads drop in here.
What can I really say though. your skill is based on the structure mostly
the rhymes connect in the right places and you present some nice imagery breh
Either way this is pretty dope man. keep dropping I feed off this kind of stuff
nice use of 'paralysis' too...yea...thats dope
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