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Old 07-08-2019, 10:56 AM   #9
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This is a tough one. I read them over a few more times to really figure this out.
Blue opener with a strong visual and then drop a bottle cap challenge line which probaby should have gone before the first line for a greater effect in my opinion. Secondly, Blue came out with a real scenario about Inf's whining and stating about it being a touchy subject which really peak my interest but he ended his rhyme with math which was cool but was irrelevant to his whining (I felt drawn away at that point). The thought his closing line was pretty clever with the Manson Vid flex.
Now for Inf, smooth rhyme opener not my type but smooth none the less. 3rd line caught me again because of the true nature involved regarding the hundred bars, but I felt the rhyme and next corralating line could have been excuted better. As for Inf''s closer was pretty dope, personally addressed with scientifical theory excuted in proper fashion.
After going through these verses a few times, Blue kept giving me something then kept taking it away like a game of peek a boo therefore I'm giving it to Inf for opening smooth rhymes and a ultimately clever closer.
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