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Old 07-24-2021, 08:28 PM   #3
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I like this man lyrics are cool, beat is cool as well. I do like your voice too I just feel like you could maybe bring the intensity to a higher level, it just sounds like you’re speaking to your audience instead of rapping to them. It might also help to throw down another track or two of vocals and layer them, I understand this was probably just something you throw together quick and didn’t really get too deep into the mixing process. Just some ideas from my standpoint, keep spitting man
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