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Extension fucked you up lol?


Okay, rock, I'm guessing you've done some longbar battling. The fundamental issue people here tend to have with that is there's a lot of dancing around a punch in favor of multis (yes I know you longbar GOATs did both) which really cuts back on the sting. You can definitely write bars that have good flow to them, but most o your punches are just references (David Carradine, R Kelly) and multis around them

Just passing on what I know these dudes would say. Your boy Lars blends writing sensibilities with battle rap style well. Might want to observe how he shows the punch a little more love, which gives it more sting

Glad to have you here though, topical guys usually bring something fresh and you're definitely beefing like a battler