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Old 10-11-2014, 10:48 PM   #9
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Certain displayed lyrical prowess, while Deadman exhibited an incomplete work.
If I am to add commentary it will be that while Certain's verse is good, very mobster like scenery, there is a lack of imaginative resourcefulness I find. Reason being, is I have seen this kind of story in some way or another. Anyways, thanks for the read.

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