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Old 06-29-2020, 03:52 PM   #2
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my man addy. i'm an admirer of her so off the bat i'm fucking with this verse. the class chuckle/brass knuckle couplet was awesome. had me thumping my chest lulz. i enjoyed this. it was quick but you never lost sight of the topic. had a very cool punchline style to it. the ending was a little to melodramatic for me but i can see her being a martyr should some shit like that happen. good job, Ad.
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