Right now i always have trouble deciding a winner in topical battles cause i don't know it never feels like theres a clear definitive winner as there does when it comes to regular battles... anyways this was a decent battle although i wasn't really felling ender's verse as much he kind of went with the same style as last week he did switch up the way he ended it i guess it was cool how he wrote a chapter three as if he was contininuing a story from the first two weeks i think that's what you were going for anyways but the writing was just too novel like and a bit boring in my opinion just wasn't feeling it i feel bad voting for the other guy twice in two weeks against ender but the other guys (activate) just had such more engaging text that really made me feel emotion for the characters in his story... so yeah i think I'm kind of forced here to give my vote to activate... i think ender just kind of needs to switch up his style a bit his lines were way too copious they were just extremely bland and it was difficult to get to the ending of his story whereas ender was totally keeping me guessing and making me want to read the next line of the story even though i wasn't really feeling the kind of lord of the rings style he was using just aint my thing... so yeah anyways...
vote: activate
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