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Old 07-23-2019, 03:01 AM   #3
Mr. J
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As it was sourced in, chop & cut each portion, distort it
rework & reword it, make it natural & don't force it.
Rewind it back..a little forward, edit it out, re-sort it.
This is how it was ordered from our lovely supporters
its all in the detail, without the presentation we fail.
let the others retell, their extended cold cuts mean well.
once you trim the fat on a fresh cut, the fresh meat sells
reviews exceed wealth when you see these sweep sales.
a couple 1,000 emails with ya face on the first page.
claimed fame in the worst way replacing the wordplay
the reign comes with the thirsty, falsifying your face
extended ya facial features to sell due to your search rate.
they rehearsed plays only to recast who leads & follows
so will your real face really get to see tomorrow? we will see tomorrow...

Ideas rambled in, the motive behind them were scrambling
each voice was heard, each gambling on the handling.
scandalous type that mouth off to the managers, adamant
the kind you wish remained abstinent that kept rambling.
misquoted as the establishment fired her for offhandedness
her pockets ravenous, while her hands mismanaged tips
sold out the teens for "using" cannabis, food mishandling
all quoted being vengeful for a poorly ran establishment
frantic with every tactic to save face when it came to the camera clips
parolees that promoted underage drinking, random twits
spoke with a plastered lisp about how they devoted companionship
saying "whoever ran this shit, they deserve 5 stars as management"
throwing up on the camera crew that abandoned quick....

Under investigation we observed separate statements
a set thats laced with different standpoints met with gazes
left with traces of ideas that are meant to say this.
what you see is what you do, what you do is what I did
so we can cut the shit, run through it again & see what I did
from the height they brought, to this grave I up & dig
the persuasion from the station to shave it & come up with this
but we went rogue & put up each antennae for the studio tower
& we broadcasting live its ~12~, allow me to introduce with power
live footage from the place we cook & eat at
cut.....we have a little feedback
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