[Barcotic]

Battler 1
I can see u champing shadow boxing. thats my hunch
Cuz you both connect with nothing when throwing a punch
Cuz you both? Awkward wording on a dated idea
I'm kidding creep, you losing is a given....
If he's making moves in shadows it's attacking unsuspecting women
Again, wording needs a tweak. Good concept, but no one would refer to the tournament as 'shadows'. + the rhyming was slacking
Quit the lame lines. Your rhymes never earn wealth
So 'committed to whack shit' ur in the loony bin for not keeping hands to yourself
Not feeling this at all
A quick cock of the glock will prove that your not hard
When I start dumping shells like red lobsters busboy cleaning after bombbard
Fire, as far as concept goes. Not so much on the execution..so this barely hit, when it could've been a banger
If you hung in my hood the goons would teach you a lesson
You'd come 'post up, then disappear' like voting in the pic section
Poor wording seems to be a recurring issue. Another dope idea, turned mediocre with bad execution
Don't get me started w/ ur slut wife. She loves to fuck all day
A few drinks and Im putting her in more positions then a great resume
Same shit. The second line alone is haymaker worthy, but you need a better setup and an above grade 3 level rhyming ability for the bar as a whole to be one

Battler 2
no telling what I do when the blades cut across
knife lodged in til ur done bleeding out, pussy. thats menopause
Slack execution, dope idea. Decent overall
I only eff with dope heads cuz my punches sooo tight
yeaa u in a league of ya own.....signing up to battle on Corleone’s site.
Lol ok
& faack an alias….shit, you still aiiint known
reps sooo anonymous. it leaves a tip n abruptly hangs up the payphone.
Dope
shadow boxing ? naa. I take to the street
deliver such combos on u my punches pushing overtime with Uber Eats
Nah man. Combo shit is mad played, and your flip wasn't enough to make it any good
uglyyy when ya mom was pregnant .. THAT shit was upsetting
we prayed she tie the knot with baby inside her. Call it a shotgun wedding.
Ok-ish
& eyybody kno ya relationship bout to fade soon
ya girl searching for a way out like date night at Escape Room.
Cool, nothing special but wording is on point

Mannnnn if these two switched each other styles and kept the same concepts, I'd have Battler 1 winning w/ a FIRE verse

Not the case tho, unfortunately for him
Mvgt Battler 2