Joe Boston
Be a man and protect your family this pussy runs to make an escape
If His plan is to Trust The Shooter ill release faster than Royce Da 5'9s mixtape
-the opener didnt tie in with the punch at all. I thought the punch was decent but could have used some help to make it better
Rock a cape plotting the hero but never at the destination where the fight is
right hand giving your bones a breakthrough each knuckle will affect ya like the Opiode Crisis
-nah i dont like this
Your a ball of Fright bitch those faggot traits seem to strike a few
Afraid of Ghost, Right Verse? U only come from under ur bed when someone actually writes for you
-nah this is weird
Got some mixed screws in my head dont make me turn the crazy level up to 10
One punch have your Jaw Sailing across the floor youll never feel the same watching Love n Hiphop again
-meh
I have my suspicions u love men your the most feminant of human beings
I think they know what u Want Ad so ur gonna leave sore without a Car,Boat or house from that magazine
-could have done somethin with want ad, u kinda ruined the punch the way you wrote it
Adverse
You ain't hard you amateur, you're a wobbly battler...
Funny he acted like the King of the Street...
......Then we ended up actually seeing a Boston massacre
-this could have been much better. Also, not a good punch to start off with, seems more like a closer to me
Love and hip hop do not conincide, end of discussion
So Tahiry won't be around when this Joe B gets shot down in public
-very bland. tahiry could have been a wordplay but u just went the lazy route
Catch Boston while he's hobblin', put him in a headlock
Throw em down, curbstomp em until I end up with Red Sox..
-nahbro
I bet your arthiritis is kickin in, and the first stages of menopause
I mean 35?!...And I thought 'senior member' was a bit too harsh..
-not diggin this and it doesn't rhyme
And your game with the women? That shit is feeble right?
Only girls I heard 'sippin joe' same ones who can't sleep at night
-who says sippin for a sexual inuendo though? nobody
Felt both battlers were weak here. I dunno if yall are new or just dropped lite but either way it's close. I've got to vote JB for better attempts.
v/Joe Boston
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