This was pretty dope I can dig the content, a pretty consistent piece as it goes for the story telling.
Fairly simple wording but there's nothing wrong with that could even
Be a dope audio maybe.
If I had to be nit-picky I'd say maybe make some more switch ups
To the flow/rhyme schemes but honestly for what it's worth it was pretty smooth and the transition you did have in there was good. Stay up, Genocide.
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