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Zoom in and have a look - you can see the naps he hasn’t took
Cuz that’s the worst case of pupils in bags seen since Sandy Hook
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Ya dad is a dirty slob
Don’t know what says ‘I’ve fucked my kids’ more; that fat smirking gob or the fact he’s jerking off..
could take or leave it
The fat gut must be hereditary, hurts to hear it yo
Clearly the only other thing that runs in this family was your mom, 30 years ago
light but funny... Don't think that's his dad tho
Why does every feature scream cunt on this weak nerds face?
I could poke him in either of those eyes and I’d have reached third base
funny but light if it's what I'm thinking
Can’t trust your old knees anymore; I guess having a sister’s reaping rewards
Where would you ever be without her? Judging by this pic in a heap on the floor
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Look at lil sis’ enormous snout, I’d do whatever the fuck that whore’ll shout
So if I put a plug to your chests n light it up that’s instructions from the horses mouth
setup is a little weird. Punch itself isn't bad, but it probably would have been better if you focused more on the 'plug to the chest/light it up/shirt' instead of including the horse's mouth part. Reads a little all over the place


This dude weak as fuck. Where ur muscles at, jerk?
It’s sad when ur arm can fit between the lines on ur shirt
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chewing or stifling a giggle? Either way u drop soap in the showers
Just read the sign - as advertised that mouth stays open 24 hours
could take or leave it
Battle outcome will be sadder than the lunch this faggot’s chompin
Pretty soon a blue rapper is what u and ur burrito will have in common
this one hit me right in the grammar
I know where u from y’all drive on the wrong side of the road
But it also looks like u have a bulb out...there on the tip of ur nose
funny
white as fuck but the hairline says Black Lives Matter the most
Dude jumped in the chair & said give me the entire eastern African coast (word to Zuchie)
this rorschach test is wild. I guess I can kind of see it, but there was probably a better angle for his bangs/widow's peak or whatever it's called
last time he whispered about the Mac he keeps hidden. His war chrome.
Well, say it with ur chest, Dave! Looks like u’ll prolly still have to lean on that horn though
3 separate reads and I don't understand the punch.

I tried with that closer Des. Made a point of coming back and see if I can solve it with fresh eyes.

Dave had

Opener
Third base
Heap on the floor

Almost went a little topical with it and made up a story, assumed characters, etc. Risky imo.

Des had

Opener
Bulb out

V/Dave with a more consistent verse