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Old 07-08-2020, 01:58 PM   #12
UPN Zuch
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Neighbor

Docs gon’ have to patch you up after these hollows rippin ya flesh
Zippered over the buttons, but trust the stitches you’ll get ain’t Mitchell & Ness

Cool

You’re DEAD; my targets get shredded soon as I’m sparkin the FN
This murder gonna be capital, Letter.. after the first bar, I was startin a sentence

Nice

7-0’d you last month, so you’re sniffin dope if you think I’d no-show
Get shot w/ a Spec Ops Beretta; put the red dot on Letter like Pinterest’s logo

Nice concept, although the idea falls short to me based on wording

I’m all-in w/ this shit, chips in my grip.. tell this fag get a hustle
Only time you had skin in the game was playin strip poker w/ your dad & ya uncle

No for me

Alias who? You ain’t legend status &’ll never be a lock for the Hall
If you get Karaoke comparisons, it’s the same song & dance w/ Letter droppin the ball

Eh

Put ya head thru the wall when I’m at ya front door like you owe me something
Chest shot w/ the pump — leave a chunk of meat hangin off the trap; I’m trophy hunting

Okay

Only posts in battles, bites outta Archives & recycles that all-around trash
So I’ma drive-by & pull up on money laundering for bein a watered-down Cash

It’s okay

Boy please, your Zimbabwean ass ain’t keepin shooters around
If they hear you clicking ANYTHING, it’s just your tongue against the roof of ya mouth

This is dope

This ain’t RB, keep sayin you’re a threat — I got the .30 by the Wesson
You got an Aer rating, but they’ll be diggin holes in dirt to find you fertilizer spreadin

Missin it for me

You’re Black & proud, but that forced wordplay style’s been a cancer
Happy to make everyone in ya Jungle Book.. & it’ll bring me Mogley to fire on a Panther

Nice closer



Up and down verse being that it started nice, started to falter and picked up towards the end. Pretty good but not your best.

Letterman

My team fuck girls in ur city. We find a dame & lay the wood
They love me like Mr. Rogers, that’s why I’m always running trains in NeighborHood

Okay opener

You got money? Brought two guns to rob em cuz I need my loot
& If you don’t end up paying inbred then I’ll raise a couple underneath your roof

Cool

Machete to ur bitch knees. The blood on the bed made an awful scene
Now you need a better mattress.. all because it was a leg hanging off your Queen

Worded poorly on a decent concept

Dealt with a lot lately, but if I see you then I’ll clutch the pound
‘Cause life is a rollercoaster, so I always have to hold the metal thru the ups & downs

Okay

.38 will turn ur life to a horror movie. You’ll be screaming & crying
Now it’s an Annabelle scene.. The little toy I possess will be the reason you’re dying

These gun bars gotta be better if it’s gonna be your main angle. This isn’t bad but eh

I’ll beat your ass for fun. So for this scary bitch, it’ll be grim
& I’m NC’s Peter Griffin.. cuz I’ll be fucking up this chicken everytime I see him

No

Bring this sheltered bitch to my block, where even police are unethical
Fucking square.. before the cops even plant base on him, he’ll be turned into a vegetable

I like this

Big guns will make u lose a couple organs when it hits the geek
Puttin choppers in the back of your mouth, u’ll cough up more than your wisdom teeth

Cool

U been fuckin a hoe. That nasty slut can’t seem to get rid of ya
Cuz Neigh-sayer pussy fire, but most guys just disagree & bring up her Chylmadia

Nah

Neigh’s a fuckin creep. Sniper rifle aimed at his crib, I expect a homi
You got the swag of a Peeping Tom, & I’m scoping Neighbor’s house tryna catch a body

Decent


On first read a couple days ago I had letter but upon reread and complete breakdown neighbor had better wording considering you guys had similar concepts. Cool battle guys


Vote neighbor


Also, that human verification bar is a fucking doozy can’t believe I am just now seeing it.
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