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Old 02-15-2020, 10:45 PM   #13
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Word guys it’s been said but I think you could both do better I’ve seen both of you do better in fact. Both seemed rushed in a way and while Candy’s Verse started off well I think it drifted over my head pretty quick. Exis just need to think about your bars a little more and write with a bigger theme in mind, make your Topics a little more organized. It’s all love fellas
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