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Old 08-01-2019, 09:19 PM   #5
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I feel like it started nice as fuck then you got lazy. Maybe tired or bored. Ran out of time? Up until..."it was dark" I was orgasming in a pool of lyrically adept metaphors, imagery and flow. Afterward it just feel like usain bolt on pcp. Eyes all red and incoherent. He got his form down due to muscle memory but he's running like a wild animal...

I think with what I've seen from peak witty we can expect loads better in the semis but nice lil key there buddy


The other verse was alright it just seemed almost... non existent ...

MVGT/ witty
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