Bleak you had a few really solid lines. Liked Shane O’ Mac/in the cage and that cable man line was sick lol. DBZ line was aight.. felt like you could of set these up a little cleaner and it actually would of been 110% doper because it has the concepts there. But you had the harder punches clearly.
Inf, I enjoyed your set ups tbh big thought some lines also could of been reworded for a harder hit.. They were pretty alright anyway tho . Think you did alright trying to use personals .. good multi usage.. power steering issue was more funny than good.lmao..
V/Bleak
for Harder punchlines that’s what mattered in the end for this one.
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