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Old 07-01-2022, 01:09 AM   #8
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Orc verse came off as very rushed to me, I don’t know just felt like there was some potential in each bar but they all just kind of fell flat and could have benefited from some rewording and proofreading. Maybe that’s just me though. Dom definitely didn’t blow me away either but I think his wording was more damaging, there weren’t any real haymakers here though.

Orc had his opener, and I might give him shrimp on the Barbie, but I feel like it wasn’t really demeaning as it should have been.

Dom had closer, care bear was okay if not a little wordy and Sonic was aight

I’d give it to Dom for the more aggressive approach. Plenty of misses here but hope we can see y’all run it back

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