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Old 02-11-2013, 06:35 PM   #3
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Disaster strikes when I bust a rhyme
A bastard that don't fit the paradigm of teen's mind at this time
Rapping black magic with passion
Temper tantrum with my six handguns
i could hold mansions for ransom
Nigga my flow handsome
stepping to these hands son is like god against plankton
Damn son, who thought dominica could be the steller nebula
Getting some chedder, bread, et cetera on the regular

lol all that shit was nice imo. the second line, plankton and stellar nebula in particular. dope stuff malachi.

its nice to see how a person writes before all the pressure from these rap boards gets to them and winds up molding their style. try to keep your own unique energy. you've got it.. trust


stretched thin, its blatant I'm a capital player - Ovechkin
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rock Seven come Eleven, bringing glocks to Bob Evans

ha. a couple nice reference flips. i wasn't feeling this as much, in general, as some of your other drops. but as a sword sharpening exercise it made sense. it had distinct personality. both sections did.

thanks for this one guys. ill be looking out.

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