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Old 09-22-2018, 08:40 AM   #5
Big Bolo
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Blue

i get it man you want titles. too bad what u write isn't tight..
u realllly Tri'cep it never works-out... i think it's time u get advice from the wife

Decent

lmao @ her sandals. u married that & STILL u wanna hype ur persona?!
call me the Shoe-mocker... those toes are lookin even worse than Mike in a coma

Hype ur persona / Mike in a coma does not rhyme for me, don't like this

kid's not even his. his Dad Bod has his wife's head spinning in rage..
i'm just wondering Wendy’s gunna realize it's the Fast Food body that's not getting him laid

Cool here

seriously ur raising the neighbors kid & ur worried about a rap quarrel?!
what's even worse Des is ur wife resembles Livestock & you STILL can’t get Pastoral

Ok

AK's & grips. i’ll take u out in a blaze of clips..
all i gotta do is ‘Pull…Chute’ - like what ur wife's about to do to ur relationship

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Des

first place? please. this nerd’s lines be gay in the worst way
How longbar gonna be the only faggot shit we all make fun of for wordplay?

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I’d do ur wife tho & days later those bed-boards would still rattle
Canadian her mouth....lead destroyer to a taste of that Silk Tassel?

Ok

i’m planting bombs in your clothes. I’ll kill u without a reason
so once blue ticks, they’ll need a few of those to sniff out the pieces

Not bad

& failing that I’m bringing guns in... I WILL watch this bitch go down
burner gets hot, I just hold the handle tighter like I’m cooking w/kids around

Decent here

let it be said that des can be twisted in the way I see bitches
but back to ur wife....is actually my favorite way that she gives head

Not really sure what happened here


Not sure if these verses were rushed because of the concept of this little tourney but they seemed rushed, nothing really standing out from either verse really both had rhyming issues but maybe with an accent the persona/coma could work but des just didn't seem to even try to rhyme imo idk was pretty even overall I'm giving this one to blue, feel he has lotb with the Wendy's line
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