Fuck another miscarriage out Des wife & nut in her juice poon
I pull 7 inches of flesh out her pussy,..that’s just somethin she use to
eh, i feel like the miscarriage bars have been done a lot and this didnt resonate with me as a fresh angle
Didn’t wanna battle u chumps, but I had to, they say my text is too legit
Last time Frac ‘forced someone’s hand’...he wound up on the sex offenders list
cool
Toss her a rack or two cos Des don’t amount to dirt
Isn’t enough in Embank to stop me from burying the faggot under a mound of earth
not really feeling the wp style here but it's alright
Who taught Des to rap? Look at this guy, swear he’s phased every time
Whatever his ‘training wills’…it’s getting met w/ two extensions placed to his side
wheels/wills is a little bit of a stretch, wording on this is a bit awkward but i like the idea
Frac claims love when Jaden don’t attempt to be sweet
Drive fast where ever J walk & leave her dead in the street
I think the second half of this couldve been flipped a little better. you're kinda talking about the same street in both sides of this metaphor
Coward ur words mean nothin, its levels to this, don’t get comfortable homie
Only ‘Em Pact’ we wanna see come true…is Des hurling himself from multiple stories
cool
Can’t rap cold blooded, we laugh cuz the shit u’ve drawn worse
Dude ur such a snake...u deserve a special shoutout from a Sinacog verse
kind corny tbh
& you ain’t no pimp Frac, hotels & bitches? Lame you a bitch
Yeah you roll through lobby’s w/women, but end up having to wait for a tip
nah not really feeling this
i actually like spree. i mean, he never even bites
but he drinks bud light, which is also what i’ve thought about every bar i’ve seen him write
eh, kinda played
tread gingerly around me, otherwise i’ll make u die slow
watch des pull up and shoot to put him underground if ry’s home
ok
How u do 16 lines in an 8 line battle? Unreal… bums chill
Im finnah make you regret being out of turn like the bitch ruggs killed
cool
Rino & Spree.. 2 brainless losers who have no name or future
Im a world beater, while u goofs couldn’t have a target audience as the vegas shooter
this ones dope to me. wording mayybe couldve been harsher, but i like it
I'm mean, rude.. me n des v. these dudes?
ill have the whole crowds jaws dropped while slayin u, this jada in Scream 2
eh it's okay, kind of an old reference and wording couldve been smoother
Sprees jaden lines will fall flat, itll read like every diss is hurried
Hes a landscaper,.. he butchers trees while rino butchers wording
ok personal, but not off the charts on creativity
U cashin checks at Walmart, while I have ur girl soaked in nut
Now u come home to no food done & shes all about space like Don’t Look Up
I feel like there's a missing tie-in with the space reference here
Don’t trip spree, ill have you out this tourney in a second
And why they call u rino? Ur more of a Jackass… always hurting for attention
cool idea, again the wording couldve been stronger but I like the idea
ryno/spree
Didn’t wanna battle u chumps, but I had to, they say my text is too legit
Last time Frac ‘forced someone’s hand’...he wound up on the sex offenders list
Who taught Des to rap? Look at this guy, swear he’s phased every time
Whatever his ‘training wills’…it’s getting met w/ two extensions placed to his side
frac/des
Rino & Spree.. 2 brainless losers who have no name or future
Im a world beater, while u goofs couldn’t have a target audience as the vegas shooter
Don’t trip spree, ill have you out this tourney in a second
And why they call u rino? Ur more of a Jackass… always hurting for attention
of the 4 lines i quoted, I prefer the 2 from frac/des. I'd say that ryno/spree had the more effective wording, so their concepts landed with more of a sting for me, but conceptually nothing really stood out to me and I feel like the momentum tapered off for the last 4 lines of it. Frac/des had fresher concepts and decent wording, but could've gotten a little more out of them if they took a harsher approach.
V/ frac and des
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