[Dominate]

Spree will…
Fuck another miscarriage out Des wife & nut in her juice poon
I pull 7 inches of flesh out her pussy,..that’s just somethin she use to

Okay I like the concept but I have questions. My questions are 1) what is a juice poon and 2) why 7? You can pretend to have a bigger dick than that here it’s OK

Didn’t wanna battle u chumps, but I had to, they say my text is too legit
Last time Frac ‘forced someone’s hand’...he wound up on the sex offenders list

Yep, that’s cool.

Toss her a rack or two cos Des don’t amount to dirt
Isn’t enough in Embank to stop me from burying the faggot under a mound of earth

Cool. I was about to tell you embank isn’t a word but I looked it up and it is - a verb meaning to make an embankment. I think you could’ve made embankment work and it would’ve been better but anyway, it’s overall still cool

Who taught Des to rap? Look at this guy, swear he’s phased every time
Whatever his ‘training wills’…it’s getting met w/ two extensions placed to his side

A little stretched conceptually IMO but not a miss, it’s kinda cool

Frac claims love when Jaden don’t attempt to be sweet
Drive fast where ever J walk & leave her dead in the street

Eh this is a boring letter play to me

Coward ur words mean nothin, its levels to this, don’t get comfortable homie
Only ‘Em Pact’ we wanna see come true…is Des hurling himself from multiple stories

Cool. Solid.

Can’t rap cold blooded, we laugh cuz the shit u’ve drawn worse
Dude ur such a snake...u deserve a special shoutout from a Sinacog verse

Lmao. I dig it.

& you ain’t no pimp Frac, hotels & bitches? Lame you a bitch
Yeah you roll through lobby’s w/women, but end up having to wait for a tip

Cool.


i actually like spree. i mean, he never even bites
but he drinks bud light, which is also what i’ve thought about every bar i’ve seen him write

Seen bud light flips before. Assuming spree actually does drink it then the personal makes it OKish.

tread gingerly around me, otherwise i’ll make u die slow
watch des pull up and shoot to put him underground if ry’s home

Would’ve missed this if I hadn’t read Lars’s vote. A little stretched sound wise but passable and the shoot and gingerly tie ins make it better. I like.


Frac


How u do 16 lines in an 8 line battle? Unreal… bums chill
Im finnah make you regret being out of turn like the bitch ruggs killed

Cool personal

Rino & Spree.. 2 brainless losers who have no name or future
Im a world beater, while u goofs couldn’t have a target audience as the vegas shooter

Execution v smooth which helped a lot. The wordplay/punch is just alright.

I'm mean, rude.. me n des v. these dudes?
ill have the whole crowds jaws dropped while slayin u, this jada in Scream 2

Wp concept feels old and the bar is centered around that more than a diss, this one’s meh to me

Sprees jaden lines will fall flat, itll read like every diss is hurried
Hes a landscaper,.. he butchers trees while rino butchers wording

Nah. ‘Butchers’ isn’t the right word to make this work.

U cashin checks at Walmart, while I have ur girl soaked in nut
Now u come home to no food done & shes all about space like Don’t Look Up

Lol. Cool. Smooth execution aided the humor.

Don’t trip spree, ill have you out this tourney in a second
And why they call u rino? Ur more of a Jackass… always hurting for attention

The jackass/hurting for attention play is dope but the rino/jackass thing is corny IMO. I still fuck with the bar but think it couldn’t been worded more harshly.


I’ve got Rino/Spree