Okay, Copy's verse had some merit of humor to it. I'm not sure what spurred this into being, but I guess this is what happens when the focal point of NC's is the discussion forum, lol. The rhyming was purposefully slanted, and the verse, for what it was had smooth wording.
MMLP, you had a good grasp on your overall tone and the direction of your story was concrete. As far as originality goes, (even though Copy's was cop-out in terms of effort) your concept maybe could've been expanded on more; like if more parallels were drawn between lizards and the Adam & Eve story.
My vote goes to Copypat in a close contest, simply because his humor proved stronger in the end.
Thank you guys for showing.
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