[NYCSPITZ]

Dominate's verse

Yo,

Start Of The Plight -
.. I'll Say It Straight Up: You're A Fuckin Farse In A Fight. Known
You To Shit Talk, But Now You BITE To Get Your Bars In The Light? Smh.. Guess You Knew Ya Lines Were Wack, n Thought You'd "Cum Illa, With One Of Aer's" ... Kinda Like 'Prince Charles & His Wife'.. (Camilla, Heir)
.. So Before You Charge In To Fight, Consider: My Hands Where Ya Life Is Resident.. So Forget The Hype And Sentiment.. YOU Know You Can't Beat Me, So Best You Can Do Is "Pray For A Par/Tied" ... Like A 'White Supremisist'..
.. & The Guy's A Specialist, When It Comes To Wackness/Apalling Brains.. Spent Years On The Net - & Not Even Scratchin The Hall Of Fame.. Plus I Beat You Twice Already Kid, So Now.. As Every Voter "Overseas, The Trip'll Take Place" ... Don't Think It's Just An 'Intenrational Holiday'..
.. D'll Have You In Ball n Chains.. Unnerved And Quick To Cover.. Creativity's Effortless, Got So Much Wit I'm Certain It Could Smother.. While You Seriously Dull - Cuz "No Kiddin, Ny-Keys LayBore" Like 'Protesting Children Workin In Calcutta'.. (Nike's Labor)
.. Even Hurt Him With Another.. I'll Administer More Pain Avidly.. Mere Fact I'm Showing For This Joke Of A Textcee Is Of Course Plain Charity, But.. I'm Afraid I'll Have To Leave You "Foal-Dead, Early"... Like 'Premature Horse Fatalities'..
.. So Of Course They Challenge Me - 'Dom, Have This Whore Disposed With, Buddy". Sure. Of Course You Know It's Funny? He Talks A Big Game, But All I'd Need Is To Take His Net Away To "Leave This Peer-Amid, His Worst Fear" ... Like 'Agoraphobic Mummys'..
.. So Before The Show Gets Bloody, - Cuz I Tend To Just Shank Chumps - Let Me Mention How Worthless You Are Nyc, If You Ever Elevated? It Aint Much. So Depending On The Mood I'll Leave You "EmBarrist-'r Ruined Completely"... Like 'Marshall Mathers' Attorney Going Bankrupt'.. (Barrister)
.. Ya Brains Suck. And You Ain't Got The Wits n Sleuth To Harm Me.. HF Contest? Saw Ny & Kaos Rippin You Apart G.. I Know It's Still Fresh To This Childish Bitch... But I'll Make Sure Losing A Tourny Is Something This "InfantReMember Foverer"... Like A 'Lifetime Commitment To The Army'..




NYC: February 12th, 2007, 12:19 PM
…and blackness descends


Originally posted by YIM convo between aero and Dom
ausnaps: I love you fam
IM_Pissed04: lol me too
ausnaps: awwww
Hahahaha….

The don is back for the hail! I won at the text grammys while your words never spawned a plaque or a sale…and we KNOW you’re gay! I told him “It’s my ass you’re fucking with” so “weigh your options” only to see him “balancing condom packs on a scale”!!!!

I’m crackin this stale bitch since ya rhymes is morbid…uppercut you into space so like “treasure hunting for chewing gum” you’ll ‘find the orbit’…cuz I don’t mean ‘dirty dancing for oral sex’ when I use a fukkin ice-pick to “grind ya forehead!!!!!!!”

Ha! My gats’ll ‘blow up’ like scarred chernobyl – I’m a star worldwide, my bars is global…Swing an axe at ya neck in a fashion bizarre and noble…So when ya paralyzed it’s like ‘sorrow for ignoring gas stops’ the way I’ll make you “REGRET you’re far from mobil”

Battlin me’s a no-no, cause truth is? This guy’s a dame! It’s like “pitying prosthetics for the legless” because you can’t hide ya lame…and I don’t mean warnings about “Penelope destroying Tom’s sanity” when I aim an RPG at ya dome and “Watch: that Cruz missle fry ya brain!!!”

Originally posted by aero on YIM
and yes dom lost to shi-1…lol
Smh! I’ll cut ya legs off at an infirmary and ban the gauze…And we know he’s a tranny, but you let a female ‘scratch you off?’ Dom is shi-1’s bitch so cut the damn applause, cuz it’s like “TV interviews with wolverine” the way we saw a “broad cast: This ex-man with claws”

I’ll slam ya jaw, plus ya wackness is something I MUST despise bitch!!!!! I rhyme sicker than pedophiles who lust the “spy kids”…So if you claim you can ‘see me’ imma bust ya eyelids! You writing battles on vacation? – Smmfh, “For God’s sake, kill yourself” like muslim pilots!!!!

Nobody wants to see this Jew win! His tombstone’ll read “Dominate, we barely knew him….” But I’ll fukkin “bulldoze you” and leave you “hanging from the rafters” so like phases of depression we can say he was “uplifted, after being stretched out too thin”

We know you a female son, so drop ya skirt!!! And if you’ll “smile in the face of death” then I’ll pop the smirk! Cuz imma stick blades in ya neck so like ‘mass mutilation of instruments at churches’ I’ll make sure to “slash ya pipes, and watch the organs stop to work!!!!!!”




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VOTES: Beyond

NYCSPITS

The don is back for the hail! I won at the text grammys while your words never spawned a plaque or a sale…and we KNOW you’re gay! I told him “It’s my ass you’re fucking with” so “weigh your options” only to see him “balancing condom packs on a scale”!!!!
lmao, humorous personal opener.
I’m crackin this stale bitch since ya rhymes is morbid…uppercut you into space so like “treasure hunting for chewing gum” you’ll ‘find the orbit’…cuz I don’t mean ‘dirty dancing for oral sex’ when I use a fukkin ice-pick to “grind ya forehead!!!!!!!”
This was a dope flip.
Ha! My gats’ll ‘blow up’ like scarred chernobyl – I’m a star worldwide, my bars is global…Swing an axe at ya neck in a fashion bizarre and noble…So when ya paralyzed it’s like ‘sorrow for ignoring gas stops’ the way I’ll make you “REGRET you’re far from mobil”
This was sick.
Battlin me’s a no-no, cause truth is? This guy’s a dame! It’s like “pitying prosthetics for the legless” because you can’t hide ya lame…and I don’t mean warnings about “Penelope destroying Tom’s sanity” when I aim an RPG at ya dome and “Watch: that Cruz missle fry ya brain!!!”
I've used missile wordplay, but this flip is crazy.
Smh! I’ll cut ya legs off at an infirmary and ban the gauze…And we know he’s a tranny, but you let a female ‘scratch you off?’ Dom is shi-1’s bitch so cut the damn applause, cuz it’s like “TV interviews with wolverine” the way we saw a “broad cast: This ex-man with claws”
I used and seen the broadcast wordplay, but this is a hot personal flip.
I’ll slam ya jaw, plus ya wackness is something I MUST despise bitch!!!!! I rhyme sicker than pedophiles who lust the “spy kids”…So if you claim you can ‘see me’ imma bust ya eyelids! You writing battles on vacation? – Smmfh, “For God’s sake, kill yourself” like muslim pilots!!!!
I've seen Aero use similar for God's sake concepts, but this was still good flip.
Nobody wants to see this Jew win! His tombstone’ll read “Dominate, we barely knew him….” But I’ll fukkin “bulldoze you” and leave you “hanging from the rafters” so like phases of depression we can say he was “uplifted, after being stretched out too thin”
This is good, not as stand out as your last few, but still nice.
We know you a female son, so drop ya skirt!!! And if you’ll “smile in the face of death” then I’ll pop the smirk! Cuz imma stick blades in ya neck so like ‘mass mutilation of instruments at churches’ I’ll make sure to “slash ya pipes, and watch the organs stop to work!!!!!!”
Organs has been done a lot, but this was a good flip.


Dominate

Start Of The Plight -
.. I'll Say It Straight Up: You're A Fuckin Farse In A Fight. Known
You To Shit Talk, But Now You BITE To Get Your Bars In The Light? Smh.. Guess You Knew Ya Lines Were Wack, n Thought You'd "Cum Illa, With One Of Aer's" ... Kinda Like 'Prince Charles & His Wife'.. (Camilla, Heir)
Seen a lot of heir plays, but this was a sick double wordplay personal opener.
.. So Before You Charge In To Fight, Consider: My Hands Where Ya Life Is Resident.. So Forget The Hype And Sentiment.. YOU Know You Can't Beat Me, So Best You Can Do Is "Pray For A Par/Tied" ... Like A 'White Supremisist'..
Pretty good wordplay here.
.. & The Guy's A Specialist, When It Comes To Wackness/Apalling Brains.. Spent Years On The Net - & Not Even Scratchin The Hall Of Fame.. Plus I Beat You Twice Already Kid, So Now.. As Every Voter "Overseas, The Trip'll Take Place" ... Don't Think It's Just An 'Intenrational Holiday'..
Seen trip'll wordplay before, but this was a dope double wordplay personal.
.. D'll Have You In Ball n Chains.. Unnerved And Quick To Cover.. Creativity's Effortless, Got So Much Wit I'm Certain It Could Smother.. While You Seriously Dull - Cuz "No Kiddin, Ny-Keys LayBore" Like 'Protesting Children Workin In Calcutta'.. (Nike's Labor)
This was an illy triple wordplay nameplay bar.
.. Even Hurt Him With Another.. I'll Administer More Pain Avidly.. Mere Fact I'm Showing For This Joke Of A Textcee Is Of Course Plain Charity, But.. I'm Afraid I'll Have To Leave You "Foal-Dead, Early"... Like 'Premature Horse Fatalities'..
This was a cool wordplay bar, used similar concepts before
.. So Of Course They Challenge Me - 'Dom, Have This Whore Disposed With, Buddy". Sure. Of Course You Know It's Funny? He Talks A Big Game, But All I'd Need Is To Take His Net Away To "Leave This Peer-Amid, His Worst Fear" ... Like 'Agoraphobic Mummys'..
Me and Paradigm used the peer amid wordplay, this was a good flip though.
.. So Before The Show Gets Bloody, - Cuz I Tend To Just Shank Chumps - Let Me Mention How Worthless You Are Nyc, If You Ever Elevated? It Aint Much. So Depending On The Mood I'll Leave You "EmBarrist-'r Ruined Completely"... Like 'Marshall Mathers' Attorney Going Bankrupt'.. (Barrister)
I've used an EmBareWrist line against Yitksha before, this flip was a little forced on the 'r part.
.. Ya Brains Suck. And You Ain't Got The Wits n Sleuth To Harm Me.. HF Contest? Saw Ny & Kaos Rippin You Apart G.. I Know It's Still Fresh To This Childish Bitch... But I'll Make Sure Losing A Tourny Is Something This "InfantReMember Foverer"... Like A 'Lifetime Commitment To The Army'..
Little forced on the infantry/infantre because when you pronounce infantry, you say it like in fin tree. Good concept though.


Rationale: This was a good battle. Both came pretty sick throughout and consistent. Dom kinda fell off in his last two bar for me though, the soundings on them were a little forced. Overrall, Dom takes originality for not having quite as many flips, but I believe that NYC takes personals because his were harder hitting. Dom's biting personal was hard, but his other one wasn't as hard as NYC's. In the end, this is damn close, but I think I'm going to have to go with NYC here for being a little more consistent and not forcing as much.

Vote: NYCSPITS


VOTES: Kyla SOza

N-Y-C

The don is back for the hail! I won at the text grammys while your words never spawned a plaque or a sale…and we KNOW you’re gay! I told him “It’s my ass you’re fucking with” so “weigh your options” only to see him “balancing condom packs on a scale”!!!!

LOL.... pretty dope punch altho kinda homo..

I’m crackin this stale bitch since ya rhymes is morbid…uppercut you into space so like “treasure hunting for chewing gum” you’ll ‘find the orbit’…cuz I don’t mean ‘dirty dancing for oral sex’ when I use a fukkin ice-pick to “grind ya forehead!!!!!!!”

LMFAO, nice

Ha! My gats’ll ‘blow up’ like scarred chernobyl – I’m a star worldwide, my bars is global…Swing an axe at ya neck in a fashion bizarre and noble…So when ya paralyzed it’s like ‘sorrow for ignoring gas stops’ the way I’ll make you “REGRET you’re far from mobil”

LOL, feelin it, not seen this flip before..

Battlin me’s a no-no, cause truth is? This guy’s a dame! It’s like “pitying prosthetics for the legless” because you can’t hide ya lame…and I don’t mean warnings about “Penelope destroying Tom’s sanity” when I aim an RPG at ya dome and “Watch: that Cruz missle fry ya brain!!!”

Dope WP and punch, feelin it

Smh! I’ll cut ya legs off at an infirmary and ban the gauze…And we know he’s a tranny, but you let a female ‘scratch you off?’ Dom is shi-1’s bitch so cut the damn applause, cuz it’s like “TV interviews with wolverine” the way we saw a “broad cast: This ex-man with claws”

nice metta, owrding slightly off on the punch, but im diggin the concept.

I’ll slam ya jaw, plus ya wackness is something I MUST despise bitch!!!!! I rhyme sicker than pedophiles who lust the “spy kids”…So if you claim you can ‘see me’ imma bust ya eyelids! You writing battles on vacation? – Smmfh, “For God’s sake, kill yourself” like muslim pilots!!!!

ommmmmmmmmmg DOPE!!!!

Nobody wants to see this Jew win! His tombstone’ll read “Dominate, we barely knew him….” But I’ll fukkin “bulldoze you” and leave you “hanging from the rafters” so like phases of depression we can say he was “uplifted, after being stretched out too thin”

haha sick

We know you a female son, so drop ya skirt!!! And if you’ll “smile in the face of death” then I’ll pop the smirk! Cuz imma stick blades in ya neck so like ‘mass mutilation of instruments at churches’ I’ll make sure to “slash ya pipes, and watch the organs stop to work!!!!!!”

feelin the flip of the punch, but the organ thing is a lil played....coo finsiher...

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dom

.. I'll Say It Straight Up: You're A Fuckin Farse In A Fight. Known
You To Shit Talk, But Now You BITE To Get Your Bars In The Light? Smh.. Guess You Knew Ya Lines Were Wack, n Thought You'd "Cum Illa, With One Of Aer's" ... Kinda Like 'Prince Charles & His Wife'.. (Camilla, Heir)

LOL, sick metta and connection, WP a tiny bit off to me tho

.. So Before You Charge In To Fight, Consider: My Hands Where Ya Life Is Resident.. So Forget The Hype And Sentiment.. YOU Know You Can't Beat Me, So Best You Can Do Is "Pray For A Par/Tied" ... Like A 'White Supremisist'..

pretty cool punch......

.. & The Guy's A Specialist, When It Comes To Wackness/Apalling Brains.. Spent Years On The Net - & Not Even Scratchin The Hall Of Fame.. Plus I Beat You Twice Already Kid, So Now.. As Every Voter "Overseas, The Trip'll Take Place" ... Don't Think It's Just An 'Intenrational Holiday'..

lol, worded really nicely, but the overseas shit ive seen b4...

.. D'll Have You In Ball n Chains.. Unnerved And Quick To Cover.. Creativity's Effortless, Got So Much Wit I'm Certain It Could Smother.. While You Seriously Dull - Cuz "No Kiddin, Ny-Keys LayBore" Like 'Protesting Children Workin In Calcutta'.. (Nike's Labor)

the Labor thing sounds forced to me but im sure its not to most, nice flip.......

.. Even Hurt Him With Another.. I'll Administer More Pain Avidly.. Mere Fact I'm Showing For This Joke Of A Textcee Is Of Course Plain Charity, But.. I'm Afraid I'll Have To Leave You "Foal-Dead, Early"... Like 'Premature Horse Fatalities'..

the concept and punch is DOPE, again tho that WP is a lil off to me....

.. So Of Course They Challenge Me - 'Dom, Have This Whore Disposed With, Buddy". Sure. Of Course You Know It's Funny? He Talks A Big Game, But All I'd Need Is To Take His Net Away To "Leave This Peer-Amid, His Worst Fear" ... Like 'Agoraphobic Mummys'..

haha, nice

.. So Before The Show Gets Bloody, - Cuz I Tend To Just Shank Chumps - Let Me Mention How Worthless You Are Nyc, If You Ever Elevated? It Aint Much. So Depending On The Mood I'll Leave You "EmBarrist-'r Ruined Completely"... Like 'Marshall Mathers' Attorney Going Bankrupt'.. (Barrister)

this is nice, despite the fact that "EM" shit is played...

.. Ya Brains Suck. And You Ain't Got The Wits n Sleuth To Harm Me.. HF Contest? Saw Ny & Kaos Rippin You Apart G.. I Know It's Still Fresh To This Childish Bitch... But I'll Make Sure Losing A Tourny Is Something This "InfantReMember Foverer"... Like A 'Lifetime Commitment To The Army'..

SIICK finisher

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dope battle..... u both came nice, NYC a lil more consistent with punches, and both had some cool WP, but dom came off forced in a few places and a lil played with the Em line... overall i'd have to say NYC had more lines that were WOW status, compared to doms, who i expected a lil more from..... if he had more lines like his finisher and the peer amid one, he coulda took this... but due to consistencey and harder hitting punches, im afraid NYC took it.

Vote = NYCSPITS


Threat (retard vote):

The don is back for the hail! I won at the text grammys while your words never spawned a plaque or a sale…and we KNOW you’re gay! I told him “It’s my ass you’re fucking with” so “weigh your options” only to see him “balancing condom packs on a scale”!!!!
LOL...Good Opener

I’m crackin this stale bitch since ya rhymes is morbid…uppercut you into space so like “treasure hunting for chewing gum” you’ll ‘find the orbit’…cuz I don’t mean ‘dirty dancing for oral sex’ when I use a fukkin ice-pick to “grind ya forehead!!!!!!!”
Coo Punch

Ha! My gats’ll ‘blow up’ like scarred chernobyl – I’m a star worldwide, my bars is global…Swing an axe at ya neck in a fashion bizarre and noble…So when ya paralyzed it’s like ‘sorrow for ignoring gas stops’ the way I’ll make you “REGRET you’re far from mobil”
Nice Metaz

Battlin me’s a no-no, cause truth is? This guy’s a dame! It’s like “pitying prosthetics for the legless” because you can’t hide ya lame…and I don’t mean warnings about “Penelope destroying Tom’s sanity” when I aim an RPG at ya dome and “Watch: that Cruz missle fry ya brain!!!”
Coo Concept

Smh! I’ll cut ya legs off at an infirmary and ban the gauze…And we know he’s a tranny, but you let a female ‘scratch you off?’ Dom is shi-1’s bitch so cut the damn applause, cuz it’s like “TV interviews with wolverine” the way we saw a “broad cast: This ex-man with claws”
Nice Personal

I’ll slam ya jaw, plus ya wackness is something I MUST despise bitch!!!!! I rhyme sicker than pedophiles who lust the “spy kids”…So if you claim you can ‘see me’ imma bust ya eyelids! You writing battles on vacation? – Smmfh, “For God’s sake, kill yourself” like muslim pilots!!!!
Feeling This Meta

Nobody wants to see this Jew win! His tombstone’ll read “Dominate, we barely knew him….” But I’ll fukkin “bulldoze you” and leave you “hanging from the rafters” so like phases of depression we can say he was “uplifted, after being stretched out too thin”
[B]Solid Connect[B]

We know you a female son, so drop ya skirt!!! And if you’ll “smile in the face of death” then I’ll pop the smirk! Cuz imma stick blades in ya neck so like ‘mass mutilation of instruments at churches’ I’ll make sure to “slash ya pipes, and watch the organs stop to work!!!!!!”
Semi-Played....Coo Finisher


Dominate

Start Of The Plight -
.. I'll Say It Straight Up: You're A Fuckin Farse In A Fight. Known
You To Shit Talk, But Now You BITE To Get Your Bars In The Light? Smh.. Guess You Knew Ya Lines Were Wack, n Thought You'd "Cum Illa, With One Of Aer's" ... Kinda Like 'Prince Charles & His Wife'.. (Camilla, Heir)
Ill Personal
.. So Before You Charge In To Fight, Consider: My Hands Where Ya Life Is Resident.. So Forget The Hype And Sentiment.. YOU Know You Can't Beat Me, So Best You Can Do Is "Pray For A Par/Tied" ... Like A 'White Supremisist'..
Nice WP

.. & The Guy's A Specialist, When It Comes To Wackness/Apalling Brains.. Spent Years On The Net - & Not Even Scratchin The Hall Of Fame.. Plus I Beat You Twice Already Kid, So Now.. As Every Voter "Overseas, The Trip'll Take Place" ... Don't Think It's Just An 'Intenrational Holiday'..
Liking This Punch

.. D'll Have You In Ball n Chains.. Unnerved And Quick To Cover.. Creativity's Effortless, Got So Much Wit I'm Certain It Could Smother.. While You Seriously Dull - Cuz "No Kiddin, Ny-Keys LayBore" Like 'Protesting Children Workin In Calcutta'.. (Nike's Labor)
SICKK!! Double WP Was Hott

.. Even Hurt Him With Another.. I'll Administer More Pain Avidly.. Mere Fact I'm Showing For This Joke Of A Textcee Is Of Course Plain Charity, But.. I'm Afraid I'll Have To Leave You "Foal-Dead, Early"... Like 'Premature Horse Fatalities'..
Nice Concept

.. So Of Course They Challenge Me - 'Dom, Have This Whore Disposed With, Buddy". Sure. Of Course You Know It's Funny? He Talks A Big Game, But All I'd Need Is To Take His Net Away To "Leave This Peer-Amid, His Worst Fear" ... Like 'Agoraphobic Mummys'..
Semi-Played...But Flipped Nicely

.. So Before The Show Gets Bloody, - Cuz I Tend To Just Shank Chumps - Let Me Mention How Worthless You Are Nyc, If You Ever Elevated? It Aint Much. So Depending On The Mood I'll Leave You "EmBarrist-'r Ruined Completely"... Like 'Marshall Mathers' Attorney Going Bankrupt'.. (Barrister)
Nice Meta
.. Ya Brains Suck. And You Ain't Got The Wits n Sleuth To Harm Me.. HF Contest? Saw Ny & Kaos Rippin You Apart G.. I Know It's Still Fresh To This Childish Bitch... But I'll Make Sure Losing A Tourny Is Something This "InfantReMember Foverer"... Like A 'Lifetime Commitment To The Army'..
Seemed Forced, But It Was A Good Closer

Overall: Dominate, His Verse Was More Complexed & Well Rounded, Tho NYC Really Suprised Me With His Good Use Of Metaz

Doom:


The don is back for the hail! I won at the text grammys while your words never spawned a plaque or a sale…and we KNOW you’re gay! I told him “It’s my ass you’re fucking with” so “weigh your options” only to see him “balancing condom packs on a scale”!!!!
Lol..Dope ass opener...brutal..

I’m crackin this stale bitch since ya rhymes is morbid…uppercut you into space so like “treasure hunting for chewing gum” you’ll ‘find the orbit’…cuz I don’t mean ‘dirty dancing for oral sex’ when I use a fukkin ice-pick to “grind ya forehead!!!!!!!”
Dope punch...orbit line was nice

Ha! My gats’ll ‘blow up’ like scarred chernobyl – I’m a star worldwide, my bars is global…Swing an axe at ya neck in a fashion bizarre and noble…So when ya paralyzed it’s like ‘sorrow for ignoring gas stops’ the way I’ll make you “REGRET you’re far from mobil”
Sick Metaz..Sick Line.....

Battlin me’s a no-no, cause truth is? This guy’s a dame! It’s like “pitying prosthetics for the legless” because you can’t hide ya lame…and I don’t mean warnings about “Penelope destroying Tom’s sanity” when I aim an RPG at ya dome and “Watch: that Cruz missle fry ya brain!!!”
Nice Flip..

Smh! I’ll cut ya legs off at an infirmary and ban the gauze…And we know he’s a tranny, but you let a female ‘scratch you off?’ Dom is shi-1’s bitch so cut the damn applause, cuz it’s like “TV interviews with wolverine” the way we saw a “broad cast: This ex-man with claws”
Killer personal and crazy punch

I’ll slam ya jaw, plus ya wackness is something I MUST despise bitch!!!!! I rhyme sicker than pedophiles who lust the “spy kids”…So if you claim you can ‘see me’ imma bust ya eyelids! You writing battles on vacation? – Smmfh, “For God’s sake, kill yourself” like muslim pilots!!!!
Strong meta..perfect flip..

Nobody wants to see this Jew win! His tombstone’ll read “Dominate, we barely knew him….” But I’ll fukkin “bulldoze you” and leave you “hanging from the rafters” so like phases of depression we can say he was “uplifted, after being stretched out too thin”
Ehh...Not feeling this as much as your other bars.. but still nice

We know you a female son, so drop ya skirt!!! And if you’ll “smile in the face of death” then I’ll pop the smirk! Cuz imma stick blades in ya neck so like ‘mass mutilation of instruments at churches’ I’ll make sure to “slash ya pipes, and watch the organs stop to work!!!!!!”
Organ concept is kinda played but still a pretty dope flip

Dom

.. I'll Say It Straight Up: You're A Fuckin Farse In A Fight. Known
You To Shit Talk, But Now You BITE To Get Your Bars In The Light? Smh.. Guess You Knew Ya Lines Were Wack, n Thought You'd "Cum Illa, With One Of Aer's" ... Kinda Like 'Prince Charles & His Wife'.. (Camilla, Heir)
Dope fucking double worplay and personal..

.. So Before You Charge In To Fight, Consider: My Hands Where Ya Life Is Resident.. So Forget The Hype And Sentiment.. YOU Know You Can't Beat Me, So Best You Can Do Is "Pray For A Par/Tied" ... Like A 'White Supremisist'..
Cool punch..
.. & The Guy's A Specialist, When It Comes To Wackness/Apalling Brains.. Spent Years On The Net - & Not Even Scratchin The Hall Of Fame.. Plus I Beat You Twice Already Kid, So Now.. As Every Voter "Overseas, The Trip'll Take Place" ... Don't Think It's Just An 'Intenrational Holiday'..
Ehh...Seen the wordplay few times..still a nice line

.. D'll Have You In Ball n Chains.. Unnerved And Quick To Cover.. Creativity's Effortless, Got So Much Wit I'm Certain It Could Smother.. While You Seriously Dull - Cuz "No Kiddin, Ny-Keys LayBore" Like 'Protesting Children Workin In Calcutta'.. (Nike's Labor)
Nice Wordplay..

.. Even Hurt Him With Another.. I'll Administer More Pain Avidly.. Mere Fact I'm Showing For This Joke Of A Textcee Is Of Course Plain Charity, But.. I'm Afraid I'll Have To Leave You "Foal-Dead, Early"... Like 'Premature Horse Fatalities'..
Ehh...Decent concept..not feeling as much as the other bars

.. So Of Course They Challenge Me - 'Dom, Have This Whore Disposed With, Buddy". Sure. Of Course You Know It's Funny? He Talks A Big Game, But All I'd Need Is To Take His Net Away To "Leave This Peer-Amid, His Worst Fear" ... Like 'Agoraphobic Mummys'..
Seen done alot...but still a nice flip

.. So Before The Show Gets Bloody, - Cuz I Tend To Just Shank Chumps - Let Me Mention How Worthless You Are Nyc, If You Ever Elevated? It Aint Much. So Depending On The Mood I'll Leave You "EmBarrist-'r Ruined Completely"... Like 'Marshall Mathers' Attorney Going Bankrupt'.. (Barrister)
Ehh..for some reason the wordplay sound forced...not feeling this bar

.. Ya Brains Suck. And You Ain't Got The Wits n Sleuth To Harm Me.. HF Contest? Saw Ny & Kaos Rippin You Apart G.. I Know It's Still Fresh To This Childish Bitch... But I'll Make Sure Losing A Tourny Is Something This "InfantReMember Foverer"... Like A 'Lifetime Commitment To The Army'..
Seems a little bit forced..

Overall: NYC: Dom had a few too many played concepts and his wordplay was forced on a few bars..NYCs was more consistent,and I feel he had better concepts

Zulu:

NYCSPITS
The don is back for the hail! I won at the text grammys while your words never spawned a plaque or a sale…and we KNOW you’re gay! I told him “It’s my ass you’re fucking with” so “weigh your options” only to see him “balancing condom packs on a scale”!!!!

Fresh ass concept. I liked this one.

I’m crackin this stale bitch since ya rhymes is morbid…uppercut you into space so like “treasure hunting for chewing gum” you’ll ‘find the orbit’…cuz I don’t mean ‘dirty dancing for oral sex’ when I use a fukkin ice-pick to “grind ya forehead!!!!!!!”

Lol, this got a laugh out of me.

Ha! My gats’ll ‘blow up’ like scarred chernobyl – I’m a star worldwide, my bars is global…Swing an axe at ya neck in a fashion bizarre and noble…So when ya paralyzed it’s like ‘sorrow for ignoring gas stops’ the way I’ll make you “REGRET you’re far from mobil”

This is nice. Never heard a Mobil flip before.

Battlin me’s a no-no, cause truth is? This guy’s a dame! It’s like “pitying prosthetics for the legless” because you can’t hide ya lame…and I don’t mean warnings about “Penelope destroying Tom’s sanity” when I aim an RPG at ya dome and “Watch: that Cruz missle fry ya brain!!!”

LMAO. Nice setup

Smh! I’ll cut ya legs off at an infirmary and ban the gauze…And we know he’s a tranny, but you let a female ‘scratch you off?’ Dom is shi-1’s bitch so cut the damn applause, cuz it’s like “TV interviews with wolverine” the way we saw a “broad cast: This ex-man with claws”

nice connects, with the "sratch you off" and "claws" and so on. was really well set up.

I’ll slam ya jaw, plus ya wackness is something I MUST despise bitch!!!!! I rhyme sicker than pedophiles who lust the “spy kids”…So if you claim you can ‘see me’ imma bust ya eyelids! You writing battles on vacation? – Smmfh, “For God’s sake, kill yourself” like muslim pilots!!!!

I agree with Strat when he says this line brings Aero to mind. But the fact is, the line was the SHIT.

Nobody wants to see this Jew win! His tombstone’ll read “Dominate, we barely knew him….” But I’ll fukkin “bulldoze you” and leave you “hanging from the rafters” so like phases of depression we can say he was “uplifted, after being stretched out too thin”

Lol, nice.

We know you a female son, so drop ya skirt!!! And if you’ll “smile in the face of death” then I’ll pop the smirk! Cuz imma stick blades in ya neck so like ‘mass mutilation of instruments at churches’ I’ll make sure to “slash ya pipes, and watch the organs stop to work!!!!!!”

I've heard a similar concept, but the flip was fresh as hell.

DOMINATE
Start Of The Plight -
.. I'll Say It Straight Up: You're A Fuckin Farse In A Fight. Known
You To Shit Talk, But Now You BITE To Get Your Bars In The Light? Smh.. Guess You Knew Ya Lines Were Wack, n Thought You'd "Cum Illa, With One Of Aer's" ... Kinda Like 'Prince Charles & His Wife'.. (Camilla, Heir)

Nice Bar.

.. So Before You Charge In To Fight, Consider: My Hands Where Ya Life Is Resident.. So Forget The Hype And Sentiment.. YOU Know You Can't Beat Me, So Best You Can Do Is "Pray For A Par/Tied" ... Like A 'White Supremisist'..

Lol, this was straight.

.. & The Guy's A Specialist, When It Comes To Wackness/Apalling Brains.. Spent Years On The Net - & Not Even Scratchin The Hall Of Fame.. Plus I Beat You Twice Already Kid, So Now.. As Every Voter "Overseas, The Trip'll Take Place" ... Don't Think It's Just An 'Intenrational Holiday'..

Oooh . . . this was NICE. I just caught the Trip'll/Triple part.

.. D'll Have You In Ball n Chains.. Unnerved And Quick To Cover.. Creativity's Effortless, Got So Much Wit I'm Certain It Could Smother.. While You Seriously Dull - Cuz "No Kiddin, Ny-Keys LayBore" Like 'Protesting Children Workin In Calcutta'.. (Nike's Labor)

I have a conflict with this bar. Knowing NYCSPITS for a minute, I've seen countless people use almost similar nameflips, including me. On top of that, NY ain't pronounced like Ny, so how is this accurate wordplay? Just had to point that out. Other than that, the punch is straight.

.. Even Hurt Him With Another.. I'll Administer More Pain Avidly.. Mere Fact I'm Showing For This Joke Of A Textcee Is Of Course Plain Charity, But.. I'm Afraid I'll Have To Leave You "Foal-Dead, Early"... Like 'Premature Horse Fatalities'..

Nice. I liked this.

.. So Of Course They Challenge Me - 'Dom, Have This Whore Disposed With, Buddy". Sure. Of Course You Know It's Funny? He Talks A Big Game, But All I'd Need Is To Take His Net Away To "Leave This Peer-Amid, His Worst Fear" ... Like 'Agoraphobic Mummys'..

Lol, this was fresh as hell.

.. So Before The Show Gets Bloody, - Cuz I Tend To Just Shank Chumps - Let Me Mention How Worthless You Are Nyc, If You Ever Elevated? It Aint Much. So Depending On The Mood I'll Leave You "EmBarrist-'r Ruined Completely"... Like 'Marshall Mathers' Attorney Going Bankrupt'.. (Barrister)

well, it works.

.. Ya Brains Suck. And You Ain't Got The Wits n Sleuth To Harm Me.. HF Contest? Saw Ny & Kaos Rippin You Apart G.. I Know It's Still Fresh To This Childish Bitch... But I'll Make Sure Losing A Tourny Is Something This "InfantReMember Foverer"... Like A 'Lifetime Commitment To The Army'..

this didn't hit too hard to me, but it was nice wordplay.


Vote: NYCSPITS. This was a REAL close battle, and it really all came down to the effect of the punches. Both had nice punches in there, both good setups. But Dom had a couple of lines where his wordplay didn't match up in my eyes, and also, some of his bars weren't hitting as hard as NYC's. NYC had more sting, and used personals to his advantage. Congrats to both battlers, however.

Prime factor:

NYCSPITS
The don is back for the hail! I won at the text grammys while your words never spawned a plaque or a sale…and we KNOW you’re gay! I told him “It’s my ass you’re fucking with” so “weigh your options” only to see him “balancing condom packs on a scale”!!!!
Pretty good, but ain't feeling the wording.
I’m crackin this stale bitch since ya rhymes is morbid…uppercut you into space so like “treasure hunting for chewing gum” you’ll ‘find the orbit’…cuz I don’t mean ‘dirty dancing for oral sex’ when I use a fukkin ice-pick to “grind ya forehead!!!!!!!”
It's alright.
Ha! My gats’ll ‘blow up’ like scarred chernobyl – I’m a star worldwide, my bars is global…Swing an axe at ya neck in a fashion bizarre and noble…So when ya paralyzed it’s like ‘sorrow for ignoring gas stops’ the way I’ll make you “REGRET you’re far from mobil”
Nice, find it suprising that I havn't seen anyone use this concept.
Battlin me’s a no-no, cause truth is? This guy’s a dame! It’s like “pitying prosthetics for the legless” because you can’t hide ya lame…and I don’t mean warnings about “Penelope destroying Tom’s sanity” when I aim an RPG at ya dome and “Watch: that Cruz missle fry ya brain!!!”
Dope flip.
Smh! I’ll cut ya legs off at an infirmary and ban the gauze…And we know he’s a tranny, but you let a female ‘scratch you off?’ Dom is shi-1’s bitch so cut the damn applause, cuz it’s like “TV interviews with wolverine” the way we saw a “broad cast: This ex-man with claws”
Pretty nice personal.
I’ll slam ya jaw, plus ya wackness is something I MUST despise bitch!!!!! I rhyme sicker than pedophiles who lust the “spy kids”…So if you claim you can ‘see me’ imma bust ya eyelids! You writing battles on vacation? – Smmfh, “For God’s sake, kill yourself” like muslim pilots!!!!
Damn, sick.
Nobody wants to see this Jew win! His tombstone’ll read “Dominate, we barely knew him….” But I’ll fukkin “bulldoze you” and leave you “hanging from the rafters” so like phases of depression we can say he was “uplifted, after being stretched out too thin”
Pretty nice.
We know you a female son, so drop ya skirt!!! And if you’ll “smile in the face of death” then I’ll pop the smirk! Cuz imma stick blades in ya neck so like ‘mass mutilation of instruments at churches’ I’ll make sure to “slash ya pipes, and watch the organs stop to work!!!!!!”
Ehh.. Your weakest bar IMO.

Dominate
Start Of The Plight -
.. I'll Say It Straight Up: You're A Fuckin Farse In A Fight. Known
You To Shit Talk, But Now You BITE To Get Your Bars In The Light? Smh.. Guess You Knew Ya Lines Were Wack, n Thought You'd "Cum Illa, With One Of Aer's" ... Kinda Like 'Prince Charles & His Wife'.. (Camilla, Heir)
Pretty nice personal.
.. So Before You Charge In To Fight, Consider: My Hands Where Ya Life Is Resident.. So Forget The Hype And Sentiment.. YOU Know You Can't Beat Me, So Best You Can Do Is "Pray For A Par/Tied" ... Like A 'White Supremisist'..
It's alright.
.. & The Guy's A Specialist, When It Comes To Wackness/Apalling Brains.. Spent Years On The Net - & Not Even Scratchin The Hall Of Fame.. Plus I Beat You Twice Already Kid, So Now.. As Every Voter "Overseas, The Trip'll Take Place" ... Don't Think It's Just An 'Intenrational Holiday'..
Nice.
.. D'll Have You In Ball n Chains.. Unnerved And Quick To Cover.. Creativity's Effortless, Got So Much Wit I'm Certain It Could Smother.. While You Seriously Dull - Cuz "No Kiddin, Ny-Keys LayBore" Like 'Protesting Children Workin In Calcutta'.. (Nike's Labor)
Ehh.. forced nameplay.
.. Even Hurt Him With Another.. I'll Administer More Pain Avidly.. Mere Fact I'm Showing For This Joke Of A Textcee Is Of Course Plain Charity, But.. I'm Afraid I'll Have To Leave You "Foal-Dead, Early"... Like 'Premature Horse Fatalities'..
It's alright.
.. So Of Course They Challenge Me - 'Dom, Have This Whore Disposed With, Buddy". Sure. Of Course You Know It's Funny? He Talks A Big Game, But All I'd Need Is To Take His Net Away To "Leave This Peer-Amid, His Worst Fear" ... Like 'Agoraphobic Mummys'..
Seen the wordplay before but the wording was solid.
.. So Before The Show Gets Bloody, - Cuz I Tend To Just Shank Chumps - Let Me Mention How Worthless You Are Nyc, If You Ever Elevated? It Aint Much. So Depending On The Mood I'll Leave You "EmBarrist-'r Ruined Completely"... Like 'Marshall Mathers' Attorney Going Bankrupt'.. (Barrister)
Pretty good, not forced IMO.
.. Ya Brains Suck. And You Ain't Got The Wits n Sleuth To Harm Me.. HF Contest? Saw Ny & Kaos Rippin You Apart G.. I Know It's Still Fresh To This Childish Bitch... But I'll Make Sure Losing A Tourny Is Something This "InfantReMember Foverer"... Like A 'Lifetime Commitment To The Army'..
A bit forced.

Vote
NYCSPITS. My first time reading a piece from NYCSPITS and damn, it was a dope verse. The wording and vibe made ever bar hit hard. Dom's verse, for the most part, was also dope but those two wordplays that I thought was forced brought it down a bit. NYC edged the battle through consistency.