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Old 09-10-2016, 01:19 PM   #14
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Cuz only 8 yr old critics can see pg


Ur wording fucked u cuz any1 over the min age can see pg movies........I don't believe there is an age limit at all honestly....that's beside the point...

Then on top of that pg is not clever....it's simple...lazy even.

U managed sum really mundane multi syllabic rhyming tho....ur right about that....but it's really only done to accentuate what should be a strong crisp well worded harsh creative punch....

An also it was awkward due to the fact that ur more concerned w rhyming......like when would u ever tell some u wrote sum bars that were "hot porn" .......never. an if u do.....maybe this thing not fur u.


Pinot idk who who sully is but I get the jist of the punch


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