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Old 03-16-2019, 02:43 AM   #2
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Can't Turn it On / Setting is Wrong
Hella Banging. Stress Knockin through Dress Bottom
SexGoblin's Deadly Facade
Espionage - Regretting it All - often
Head in a Wall. Spent alot of Time Alone
So. My Mind's My Home

Bruh, Idk wtf is going on in your head but it sure as shit is dark as hell and I love every bit of it. This was beautifully crafted, didn't feel good about the way I quoted it but I liked that section a lot.

Bunch of babies wanna Crawl the Planet
Trying to Solve the Panic saying God's the Answer
Y'all Logic-Tranced goofballs like Ross & Chandler
^Fuck, this shit is one of the dopest lines I've ever read.

Generate Pen Escapes from Planet Fucked
But there's an Attractive Force like when Magnets Touch
That Binds Me to the Land of Dorment §ols that Can't Erupt
S'why I Normally Twist it with Orbiting Crystals & Sorcery Symbols
^Keeping the dopeness up.

Administer Exorcism upon Swiveling Head that Spits
Tally whats Holy in the Valley of Dope Beats - Deliver an Exodus
^Dropping some references I didn't expect in here in a metaphorically cool way.

And the Combat Angst with Chants stuff was cool too, too many quotables in this. Shit is dope from beginning to end imo. Rhymescheme going on and on throughout, reads easily and the flow feels natural, references going wild, deep and dark af here and there, everything I love about an OM-piece. If that OmNom shit is still going I'm dropping one for this.
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