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Old 06-08-2013, 01:01 AM   #42
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Verse was pretty slick a nice flow to it as well
you bounced your word usage around to rhyme well
which had this piece oozing with nice mixture of arrogant tendencies
while also turning it into a stronger stand towards the end
a good twist for the whole verse...nice drop my dude keep writing
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