Universe- always enjoy your pieces. The second half was super cool and I liked how you ended it. The whole tone changed and I think you stood sharply by the details of the picture throughout. Lol @ the Indian giver line.
Clut- loved how you stepped up unexpectedly for this battle. This is only the second piece I’ve read from you but I really enjoyed your take on it. Your creativity is heavily present throughout. Though I honestly found your verse more interesting to read through, I have to edge it to Universe for his consistency to details of the picture and also just a more compact verse in general, line for line
V/ Universe
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Originally Posted by Objective
Judging from those pics and the state you're in I've concluded with the fact that the world needs more Bodeys.
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Last edited by Bodey; 03-29-2020 at 05:19 PM.
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