[Universe]

Good little battle here.

Candy, as I said, respect for the quick post and it was a solid verse although I was having a little trouble following along with the story you were trying to tell. Kinda felt all over the place. Just needed a little more focus. Stay true to the picture you're given.

Clutbuck, (what's up with that name lol) I really enjoyed your verse. The story was cool and I loved the little bits of alliteration you sprinkled in there. That's something I havent seen often here so I definitely appreciated it. I felt you really nailed the essence of this topic and it just felt... right. Like your text was meant for the picture... which is the ultimate goal.

Vote - Clutbuck