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Old 08-20-2017, 02:25 AM   #6
Pinot Grij
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Join Date: Jul 2013
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Nik

Opener hot.
Nose growth ok.
F line is funny.
herpes line is good - but had a lotta working parts that made it read a coupla times.
Eyes line is aight.
Stick to head line is aight.
Rusty line is ehh.
Wowowowowowow-- alienize line hits fuckkkkkkkin haaaard. Amazing.
Fish lips cool.

vs Schad.

Opener ok.
Snapchat line is cool.
Goonies line is ok?
Lolol @ angry smurf line. That's dope.
Eyelashes line is cool.
Semen cream - ok.
Billiard ball nose -- great construction on the line.
Treasure troll cool writing too.
Tiny dentures funny.
Closer ok.

Line for line this is open to interpretation -- but for me it comes down to alienize line vs. angry smurf line. Ionneven care that Nik meant "alienate" and wrote "alienize" cuz he's ESL. That line was cool.

Vote -- ill nik-A
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