Netcees - View Single Post - Habitat (5-3) vs. Sour Joog (3-0)

Pinot Grij · 02-12-2018, 02:07 PM

Habitat
Unemployed line is ok, but kinda generic
Enbombz is weird.
Atheist line is overcooked
Holocaust is played, but line is executed well.

vs

Sour Joog

Opener is cool, but you must be British by the way it's rhymed
Desolate is a cool play.
180 is ok.. it's just a bit hard to follow to give it that harsh bite.
Banger n mash -- ok, bro. you ARE British. but that's old wp.

I guess I'm giving it to Joog based on fresher concepts. Hab was alright but lacked originality -- two nameplays, a religion line and a holocaust line. Pretty generic. Joog took some different angles, which made things more interesting.

Vote -- sour joog

02-12-2018, 02:07 PM	#18
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195060	Habitat Unemployed line is ok, but kinda generic Enbombz is weird. Atheist line is overcooked Holocaust is played, but line is executed well. vs Sour Joog Opener is cool, but you must be British by the way it's rhymed Desolate is a cool play. 180 is ok.. it's just a bit hard to follow to give it that harsh bite. Banger n mash -- ok, bro. you ARE British. but that's old wp. I guess I'm giving it to Joog based on fresher concepts. Hab was alright but lacked originality -- two nameplays, a religion line and a holocaust line. Pretty generic. Joog took some different angles, which made things more interesting. Vote -- sour joog __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.