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~RustyGunZ~
Guys here's the vote - it don't count but I'm a motherfuckin machine so here...
Wordz vs. Dy (week 3)
I got Wordz here guys.
Veteran great verse and just pretty top notch fire for most of it.
DY
YOU ARE UNLUCKY my friend, Drew 2 legends in a row after your week 1 VOTW
THIS verse here of yours is nice...eh...nice but NOT the FIRE of week one and YEAH THE EVEN BETTER (LOSING FIRE) OF WEEK 2:
reasoning:
I feel lke (god am I feeding this sentence):
Occccasionally you overuse Gunplay (FINE if it's really great like wk 1 or 2)
Occccasionally you overuse Caps even, and maybe a few !exclamation points sometimes/
I LOVE AND USE BOTH CAPS AND !, HOWEVER DY, I THINK in the future if you just cut down SLIGHTLy (even tho i hypocr. asked for a cap on wk2)
cut both down SLIGHTLY you will read more straightforward and harsh.
Right?
Just MY suggestions.
I'm only 39 and have only worked at newspapers and edited/wrote most my life so......
RIGHT @
Barcotic @
Zuo YOU SENSITIVE WEAK COCKSUCKING FAGGOTS
ANyway
Wordz!
FIre man you really got everything you talked about
I could sure prolly pick 1 bar or half a line but u know what
VOTW so far easy. easy.
lol
ALL I ASK IS U EXPAND UR HORIZONS, READ A FWE OTHER GUY'S BARS
MAYBE SLOG THROUGH A LONG BATTLE OR SOMETHIN, just see whats up
ACCCCEPT THAT FACT THAT SINACOG AND I QUICK-HIT A LOTTTT so a 1 line punch or a 3line punch aftetr too-long setup LEARN IT DEAL WITH IT FUCKING USE IT SOMETIME (If u want)
we travel at lightspeed lars.
This vote is a GREAT vote and HoL said I clock in at like under 7 mins here
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Aero keep this on the chat THX (it's battle stuff BA)