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Originally Posted by Certain
Malachi, this was kind of simple compared to some of your other stuff. The beginning was the problem: The "decline" rhymes were thin, and you used a ketchup line right at the start that kind of ruined the whole thing. The content and rhymes improved a little as they went on, but it didn't seem as interesting or unique as some of the other stuff you've posted lately. |
The ketchup line was corny huh lool sounded fire when I thought of it at first
But thanks for the feed bruh