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Old 08-04-2022, 10:27 AM   #7
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Fire battle.. reserved for later

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Originally Posted by Sharp View Post
UserName's Verse

I’ll clown this Brit, keep talking and ur gettin pounded quick
Your verse is like Resin’s house, full of dumb Flips that never amount to shit
I don’t get this from the off… am I retarded?… maybe
I’m firing until the sound goes CLICK, ur losing it kid, don’t shake and shout
Of course I’m removing your lid, I always separate the trash when I take it out
Ok ok how many trash bars we gonna do this season… it’s ok though
Who’s debating now? Geez Dave, you’ve got a fiends face
If a getaway driver made the turns that your teeth make, he’d escape every police chase
Funny angle and creative… it’s decent
Your verse is for the birds, all it does is leave a sour vibe
If my verse is for the birds it’s because of all the power lines
Bit swag and flow but this is still nice
Your girl sending me pictures, her & her friends licking her toys
Ain’t been a hard drive this packed full of bitches since ur last road trip with ur boys
Decent
Verses put everyone to sleep, we can’t listen to Dave
Your bars should come with bedsheets attached like a prison escape
Nice
Yea I’m a heavyweight, and all my haymakers divide
All you got is cat-like reflexes, which explains why Resin ate you alive
That’s dope, good personal touch
Teeth looking like a western pine was fed through a jet turbine
You’ve never gone the extra mile, but my uppercut will fix that in record time
Seemed like it was going somewhere but the punch was weak
You dress like a homeless bum, all ur clothes are done
Dave’s closet is all Hand-me-downs, like when Seth asks to hold his son
Lol. Funny, but this punch seems like it does more damage to Seth than Dave



Dave's Verse

Fuck text I’m catchin bodies and leavin em in vacants
You’re here to cement your place in the playoffs.. I’m here to cement your place beneath my basement
Battling my old buddy is kinda weird I won’t front
There really is a lot to unpack here - user brought his own lunch
Dave don’t talk to police. If they wanna know they’d better read my mind
If user rolled over on his friends there’d be nothing left for the feds to even find
I’m known for pulling all nighters, tear up the city when we turnt out
If you came home in the Wee hours you’d find me pissing in your girls mouth
She told me you could never last and that was all I had to hear
My dick was inside for so long it came out with gang connections and a tattooed tear
Not really the type to care but my fits are always kinda rare
If he steps out head to toe in drip he’s probably just had to tackle a flight of stairs
I’m rubbing shoulders with celebs.. the type of party he blatantly dreams of
The only star-studded affair he’s ever known was helping LGI to take those jeans off
My moneys so long I can’t spend it all but I keep tryin
Only thing User’s known to fritter away is every meal in his deep fryer
Take this W and take my pals out - love celebrating and it’s that time my friend
If your boys are giving you chest bumps it’s CPR cus you’ve flatlined again
I bring you the other half of my somehow fucked up vote…

Dave's Verse

Fuck text I’m catchin bodies and leavin em in vacants
You’re here to cement your place in the playoffs.. I’m here to cement your place beneath my basement
Punch a bit long winded but I dig the idea, it’s decent
Battling my old buddy is kinda weird I won’t front
There really is a lot to unpack here - user brought his own lunch
Lol, I liked this a lot
Dave don’t talk to police. If they wanna know they’d better read my mind
If user rolled over on his friends there’d be nothing left for the feds to even find
Lol again cool
I’m known for pulling all nighters, tear up the city when we turnt out
If you came home in the Wee hours you’d find me pissing in your girls mouth
Wee hours is a bit of a stretch to me. It’s ok
She told me you could never last and that was all I had to hear
My dick was inside for so long it came out with gang connections and a tattooed tear
That’s dope to me, ‘inside’ flip actually quite simple but this is cleverly done
Not really the type to care but my fits are always kinda rare
If he steps out head to toe in drip he’s probably just had to tackle a flight of stairs
I’ve personally seen a lot of fat/can’t tackle stairs connections which took away from ur punch slightly
I’m rubbing shoulders with celebs.. the type of party he blatantly dreams of
The only star-studded affair he’s ever known was helping LGI to take those jeans off
Ok
My moneys so long I can’t spend it all but I keep tryin
Only thing User’s known to fritter away is every meal in his deep fryer
Ok. Solid
Take this W and take my pals out - love celebrating and it’s that time my friend
If your boys are giving you chest bumps it’s CPR cus you’ve flatlined again
Lol good closer
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User was on point with the multis and wording , Dave wasn’t too dissimilar either.. but in the end, Dave gets my vote for heavier overall hits

Tricky one though. Good shit both of you. When I first read this I had user… but reading a couple of times, Dave just came with it
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