blue:
dope vocab and you really ran it home with emotion.. great depiction of a society torn by its control it felt like if you were to spit it it would come out in one breath.. very fluent I am glad to have seen you do a topical piece..
Adonis:
great ender this was very poetic lol to the extreme.. def had a nice heart beat to it that projected the reader along smoothly.. vocab was on point and the subtle story was def inspiring..
Creativity-- adonis
Entertainment-- blue bayou
Flow-- adonis
Rhyme Scheme-- adonis
Consistency/Topic-- blue bayou
Literary Devices (alliteration, assonance, allusion, etc..) -- blue bayou
Emotion-- blue bayou
Imagery-- blue bayou
Vote-- blue bayou
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