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Old 07-24-2019, 07:07 AM   #5
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blue:
dope vocab and you really ran it home with emotion.. great depiction of a society torn by its control it felt like if you were to spit it it would come out in one breath.. very fluent I am glad to have seen you do a topical piece..

Adonis:
great ender this was very poetic lol to the extreme.. def had a nice heart beat to it that projected the reader along smoothly.. vocab was on point and the subtle story was def inspiring..

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Literary Devices (alliteration, assonance, allusion, etc..) -- blue bayou
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