[Answer]

Nice seed! this isnt a free ride or cheap uber
the only time they’ll ever crown vic is n the back of a police cruiser

ok opener

This is a prank, kid. n u cant call me a liar
cuz you’re such a bag of shit I could sit you on a porch n set u on fire

Eh, execution is ok but I've seen the general idea done before multiple times in better ways

We feel bad for you. can’t deny the truth
last time we let victor cruz through injuries retired you

execution here is flawed, but the idea is cool

Take a shower bitch. maybe wash ur fucking face
cuz you got a musk so bad it would make elon hide in space

nah, this is a miss

Whens the deadline? I'll drop early u can’t beat me
cuz i’ll have a KO biden. your just sharting on live T.V.

no

Gift your girl ipad’s, ipod’s and mac books. stop and listen
u can give her all v-tech. my honda is still where i smash’d ur bitch in

execution is flawed, idea is ok

U got no friends, that signature is half-way true
if money makes u anti-social. what does 10 years of online battling due

kinda funny but lacks lyricism

Your girl don’t even shave her twat. she must be on a mission..
..to keep furlough. even prisoners would skip that conjugal visit

ok idea, execution is flawed





Yes indeed I’m here for blaming gatts
Hit ya chest til lungs collapse an ya screams make no sense like an answer track

regardless of my involvement of the line, I wasnt really feeling this

I get it jumping and spit fire . Bitch I’m from a hot barrio
U lack star power and can’t dodge these big ass bullets , you not Mario

the general idea has been done before on more than one occasion but this is otherwise cool

Imagine this fag tryna rap ? He can’t either
Crowd a be more pissed than a joint picnic wit KKK and ANTIFA

Not feeling this one

Hit ya more than twice .. only thing left is stains to wipe
Catch him in the cross fire ... smoked from multiple angles like a hookah pipe

Idea is dope, I think the execution could've been smoother

Call ya bitch dual mag.. cuz on her face u can load twice
Rick flair robe nice ..Punches a fuck ya balance up worst than a strobe light

this is alright

The fuck is tradann? Some weak prick I erase when the beam spit
Funny u Named ya self after ya reputation .. neither one of em mean shit

ok, too straightforward for my preferences

I can beat u wit a first draft .. don’t gotta edit the final verse
U been texting 10 years ... been in 100 tournaments ... and NEVER wrote a Finals verse

ok

My style ? Lames never could beat it ...
Think it’s a game ? Uppercut lift ya out ya seat quicker than the pledge of allegiance

Think you could've appended some more onto this to make it stronger, but solid closer




Nice seed! this isnt a free ride or cheap uber
the only time they’ll ever crown vic is n the back of a police cruiser
This is a prank, kid. n u cant call me a liar
cuz you’re such a bag of shit I could sit you on a porch n set u on fire

vs.

I get it jumping and spit fire . Bitch I’m from a hot barrio
U lack star power and can’t dodge these big ass bullets , you not Mario
Hit ya more than twice .. only thing left is stains to wipe
Catch him in the cross fire ... smoked from multiple angles like a hookah pipe
My style ? Lames never could beat it ...
Think it’s a game ? Uppercut lift ya out ya seat quicker than the pledge of allegiance


tradanN had some decent hits with his first 3 lines, then I feel like his verse fell off quite a bit. Victor stayed more consistent throughout. Hookah pipe is probably the lotb for me


v/ Victor