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Old 09-06-2022, 05:53 PM   #9
Aero
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Resin

Boyyyy ur originality really took a sharp dive..
figures u talk bout baseball.. them concepts are Dugout from the archives.
this is cute but not hard hitting
bitch I’m sayin this rudely.. ur stolen lines are failin to move me..
Hens was a monsterrr..
& whats comin out ur mouth’s just the lil version like the Alien movie.
I mean, we get it but like okay.
ohh u think u an animal huh, well u wont fare well in this fight..
we already know Australia is known for shit coming out of nowhere to bite.
cool. lot of loose concepts though
plus YOUR girl is hefty.. facts is what i’m sending this fool..
even horror movies cant provide a bigger jump scare than when ur girl enters a pool.
LOL fire
It’s nothing but uppercuts now. yeah it’s about to get goryyy..
motherfucker i’ll light up your chin like you telling a campfire story.
I've seen this on numerous occassions. I cant feel this
Playtime’s over, FAGGOT.. with trust ur kids don’t have much dude..
cuz next time they’re seen with a doll it’s police askin where did ur teacher touch u.
Nah man.. Kids dont play with dolls in school this is a miss.. good attempt
It’s gun violence. Who you think you testin in here?
the way I give you Sub after Sub you can call outta work for the rest of the year.
Niiiice
swing the blade to ur abdomen, dont even bother to shield..
knives out, it’s Zeke Elliott.. i’ll have ur belly hanging out allllll over the field.
This was cool
Fuckin ur slut I’m gonna show how it’s done, she’s a whore that has fun.
for meee that bitch opens up her thighs quicker than Robocop’s gun.
LOL, good
RB voting saved u last time, pussy is what this bro showed..
now u gettn a low blow.. cuz i just shook down this lil flake like a fuckn snow globe.
okay, kinda loose concept

Overall this was cool. A lot of concepts were loose and didn't come together well enough to make an impactful hit.


Dom

Smacking you back to China again is nothing but fun for me bro
Ima make you look dumb w/ the flow
Remind you of your communist roots - everything you produce just keeps getting publicly owned
cool concept but unreasonably long

AiYyOo…

I post up with OGs - get respect in the streets that I’m traveling
You post up with Oh Geez when you check in and see who you’re battling
LOL'ed, love this
Wowwww @ that champ match, you showed me your brand as a textcee
I mean damn bro, you really went after me… In the league’s standings the next week
Concept is done
Signed out like a butthurt bitch the moment you lost in that feud
It didn’t take a Pet Detective to know why a Snowflake was gone from the pool
two snowflake lines in one battle. what's going on.. this was okay
You shouldn’t be in the playoffs now - wayyy too much of a princess
I really gotta question your entry here, like when your wife asks “um, is it in yet?”
lol kinda silly though
I asked her mouth or pussy. We can do it the nice way if you choose, boo
But if I gotta get the chopper out?
It’s gonna be tied to the fuckin back door gettin slammed like a loose tooth
LOVE the concept.. the wording took away.. Almost too technical
She tells you everything’s FINE… but I’m the one who gives her a slick cunt
She gives you that mechanical bull but in practice gets off w/ a big buck
Alright
One more math teacher line I’ll send ur body back to China bro
Police like my worst students. They’ll never learn how to find the Slope
Almost a diss to your own teaching though
Matter fact, ya whole fam get clapped if you messing w/ the gawd
Keep talking & that auto reply. You’ll get the message when they’re gone
I like this... auto reply lines have been done before but solid take
You were desperate to champ but sorry man, it’s not happening
Your league run a claw machine: started to pick up only for the prize to slip through your grasp again
nah man this isn't it

Overall, I liked how you started but then had some dry spots. Wording is on point per usual but got too wordy for me like you were either over wording things. Dope concepts though




This was a decent battle. I wish both of you would've checked in with your friends and see what would work. Res had a line that's been used 100 times, Dom was too wordy. This is close, I'll have to do a numbers breakdown which I refuse to do. I'm undecided for now.
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