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Old 07-09-2022, 12:36 AM   #7
Adverse
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Answer:

like the mayans, we seen ur days are numbered & u picked the wrong one
now the stock in my whip ready for icing like the cinnabon truck
^ this was alright lol

ur fam tries to find you I raise arms like randy orton
Grocery divider, they see the stick and know to quit scanning for em
^ lol alright

You so broke you be checkin the count in your checkin account
Like the man show, Girls are always bouncin soon as your credit comes out
^ I liked the connections but didn’t feel like it was great

You go from running, to passing - audible play shit
I don't gotta hear a pin drop to see a pin drop on your location
^ didn’t like it personally

Money in the bank, the ladder crawling with cases
I’m taking you out when it ring like a call in the matrix
^ thought this whole concept was discombobulated but I guess it works

BAO! In your mouth like chinese food
The shotgun in my whip can pump your brakes like a driving school
^ alright cool here

Defiant (you actually showed! Holy shit lol)

Ya deaf cunt, with girls I fear ya def slacking
Only getting good vibrations, when she's telling u to put ya hearing aid back in
^ this was a good concept and decent opener

Rapping online n in person, its not a succesfull life this nerd is playin
I'd say you've found ya calling, if you could hear a fuckin word I'm saying
^ it’s okay but two deaf jokes makes it feel less impactful

Every girl thinks you're a loser, bet u wish u could switch with def
If ya got ya finger to the pulse, it's to make sure you haven't bored that bitch to death
^ concept okay execution was meh

Fat slob n disabled, must be near death n that's a sore feat
U ain't just playing the back nine, you aint got much room left on ya score sheet
^ see what you were going for but nah

Ya mom's a fucking hero, shes got my support its true
U coming out musta put the fear of God in her, so much we'd legalise abortion with you
^ no. Cool reference to recent events but overall execution is bad

Gun bar after gun bar, u with any weapon near I do doubt
This life your portraying is such a stretch, it could take ya fat legs and pull ya hearing aid out
^ nope. Not for me. And that set up was bad

Overall I think Def had a good opportunity here for an upset, he obviously knows how to battle and had some decent ideas but overall it just turned into him fumbling. Answer won with consistency, far from his best verse but still enjoyed some stuff

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