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Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk
Just a filthy addict, not getting girls even if you wined & dined
Pussy? Tixelix nothing unless it's the rim of that bottle tryna find a high
--u had a dope wordplay here but ur angle was lazy ok line
#1 in NBL wen it sucked,big dogs come out n ya couldn't even play
cus it had no bodies n ironically every match u won could of gone either way
--nah bro
U ain't popular at all.. always got bullied at school dances & class
so if he's an Outsider, it's at parties when this nerd's camped on the grass
--concept needed to grow a little more u were too short with it/ and i dont mean lenght of the concept btw i mean substance of the concept
I could drop wayyy wack still beat u it's straight facts, votes are all mine b
i'll could be frank w/ u n u still wouldn't get the point to advance to round 3
--decent concept wording hurt
no threat to me I'm better g u ain't important u queer
tic'll cause me no problem here like I've been dealing w/ the disorder for years
--nah played wordplay and the angle wasnt creative enough to justify it
Meh
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Tic
First off, look at that record. That many losses is absurd in this context
The 33 is a survival story. Yours is a death sentence for wording & concepts
--word. this hits even harder since i read his verse and not letting his concepts develop more hurt him.
You’re killin yaself w/ those wack plays. Now it’s do or die fool
It’s like making picks for the draft. & this battles the result of the suicide pool
--this is okish
I’m an avid Golfer, so keep it up fgt & you’ll get a club to the face
Aldila RIP blow to Smirk, while you ride more shafts than that company makes
--i follow golf and ive never heard of that company lol but ill give u the benefit of the doubt here. good line.
Plus this dude isn’t reckless. Hot verses? I’ll drop 2 in succession
This one’ll bring you to ya knees. AKA the ONLY thing this fgt drops to in succession
--ik its a wp but rhyming succession w/ succession is wack lol.
Learn to write, cuz ya punches keep missin dweeb
Cuz ya wording leaves a Lot to be desired - As top seed in the gimmick league
--ok
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gal had opener which was lotb
that was enough to win here
lottos concepts need more substance, his angles are always straight forward it seems
plus his wording was pretty iffy.
gal got it cool read
v/ tic