This was tough
Baron’s story held attention, but seemed to simple.. almost cliche. It lacked the creativity I felt was needed, but held attention and went smoothly
NYC was like the exact opposite, it was creative and transitioned nicely, but some parts seemed a little dragged-on, or almost try hard. Still everytime I felt myself drifting the next line caught it with some weight.
Baron had the stand out trust/gram line n easy reading
NYC had just a better story that was more engaging
Vote -NYC
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Adonis