Interesting read. Good rhymes as always. A lot of the concepts were above my head today tbh.. I think I will break down one if your future verses. The mood and tone were pretty distant for me here, felt like a general air of warning but it came off stale. This is probably just a verse for another day. i found myself skimming. The writing and concepts are always impressive though keep writing
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