[Destroyer]

I got user here but fgr wasn’t bad at all
Just tighten up the wording and don’t rely on simile concepts as much unless they’re universally understood and hilarious
Opener was funny. Ginger snaps could have been a great bar just delivered differently it would have had more impact like at the end of the bar... something about snacks and then ... til this ginger snaps... whatever.
Anyway, I liked it, also doughnut powder was lols. But like hush said. Tighten up that wording and you’ll be a problem
User, grazed through this one pretty handily

V/user