[Sharp]

Don't you remember Momma said don't play wit ya meals
Hoping this Mic Checkin get me mills resemblin Jordan Nike deals
Don't dare bring no steel to this fight of pencils
Before you stenciled out on the concrete you can't compete with the ink spill
Stuck in the bars but not allowed to drink still
^dug it

Like I've been killing these sixteens and I ain't reached the age
A slave to the page till I see my grave but no whips or chains could make
Know Reign or shine ain't dependant on rain or shine
Crowned King Author, the game is mine.
more cool ideas, king author was okayish but in the context it's pretty cool



in a nutshell I like what you're going for, it reads like an actual rap and has a lot of that swagger. I thought it got a bit stretched at times

Rep Houston on this microphone like codeine in the two styrofoam though never slowing
till my contacts align wit contracts and the Mac get stacked wit Chedder Jack for the Kraft infact

could've used some punctuation or a break inbetween for the sake of the reader (though it might just be me)

but yeah some of the wordplay was a little eh (didn't like the heinz catch up thing cause it's done, cats buzzing like felines in behives was funny cause it read well) but there was clever stuff (dug the shit about your age and the potential for the reign or shine idea)

keep it up and write more often, you're a good writer