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Old 10-16-2013, 02:38 PM   #20
Mr. J
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Hard edged on a dull blade swinging til the blood spray
Feather weights get carried away by the gusts grace
front face soldier I'm going opposite of the one way
linguistic technician respected flood system
lyrical gun play meeting metaphorical transitions
Singing swords. bud blazed by magnifying the suns rays
orchestrated fun day deported tactician
the stanzas well written but the message lacks image
kill em all and have the flag half risen
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