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PancakeBrah · 09-02-2016, 08:12 PM

This is the beef that will either end the site or renew it with more intense vigor than ever before seen.

About 20-25 lines into my verse. Going to fantasy draft here soon. Will finish in the AM, hungover. Very excited to match up against Richard Corey. I've been reading all of his blog posts. I have some critiques but in general I thought they were fine! Very nervous. Thinking about scrapping this grandiose idea and just WRITERING, man. Straight from the heart. Against such a behemoth, one gets reticent. But I'll do this thing. I hope people like it. I hope I'm not crossing any unspoken boundaries with this paragraph. Would feel sheepish and reclusive if I was. Pharaoh's Army is one of the craziest (legitimately) people in the country. Get help bub. Well thought out response, bb.

09-02-2016, 08:12 PM	#55
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	This is the beef that will either end the site or renew it with more intense vigor than ever before seen. About 20-25 lines into my verse. Going to fantasy draft here soon. Will finish in the AM, hungover. Very excited to match up against Richard Corey. I've been reading all of his blog posts. I have some critiques but in general I thought they were fine! Very nervous. Thinking about scrapping this grandiose idea and just WRITERING, man. Straight from the heart. Against such a behemoth, one gets reticent. But I'll do this thing. I hope people like it. I hope I'm not crossing any unspoken boundaries with this paragraph. Would feel sheepish and reclusive if I was. Pharaoh's Army is one of the craziest (legitimately) people in the country. Get help bub. Well thought out response, bb. __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?