Sn00p
that's not even funny to read. wtf is wrong w/ this geek?!
the way u talk about a con'dement,cha look like one suffering from the disease
like the concept, but the wording needs work. this comes off a little forced
rapist & murderer that follows kids. otherwise this fag's soft
it's no fairytale when the boy's beans stalks get axed after they have Jack off
not a fan of this one
dude's wrecked. if sn00p text, the drop is fire & fresh
but when killing text... well. at least we know WHY it is dead
this as cool
liars get neg'd. 4th base teaching this square ab patience
when that bitch didn't let u in, u were De/Knight worse than in their situation
haven't been around long enough to know the background on this, but denied to de/knight is a little forced to me
take 'em back to mine when i hit on girls. u make bitches hurl...
only chick wanting to go back to KS has to find a yellow brick road to a wizard 1st
i like the closer
Killing Spree
Im'a known bully in the streets. There's no give or take kid
Ppl always ACT'n tough, S'Why "doing U" is not in ur consideration
i see what you were doing but the punch is weak
Plus I chop bodies. drop hot on me? I'll have sn00p quick in the trash
I'll go out on a limb wit sharp bars, till urs are small enough to fit in the bag
you need a better set up to make 'out on a limb' work here. this would have been cool if worded properly
Ya moms corpse laid out is foreplay now - this wen I'm scarier
...finger that dead bitch
Then slap ya wit period blood on my hand before they burry her
this is more gross out than effective punch. and im pretty sure dead women don't have periods. concept needs some work
Plus I blast Hulk size bullets out the Iron Man, that'll dead ya crew
One round'll have u out cold quicker than Hush, @ Avengers 2
this punch works
Bring out that temper? Trust the hands'll do more than jus harm
I won't just push snoo's buttons, I'll record ya last words & use them for morning alarms
got you but doesn't hit that hard the way its worded.
I've seen better from Sn00p back in the day, but he delivered on the basics with a solid but not earthshattering drop. killing text and the closer were cool, even if there weren't any draw dropping lines in the verse.
Don't think I've read Killing Spree before, and I can tell he's a little bit newer because he's not picking the best concepts and still needs to work on his wording. A few of these bars are complete misses outright, and some just missed because of bad execution, but I can see the potential from the Avengers 2 line and snoo's buttons. Just need to work on the wording.
Vote: Snoop
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