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Old 08-24-2016, 06:35 PM   #7
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literally lold when you said that your eyes lazy.
this was an interesting take on a piece for around here.
pretty cool introduction, the lines seemed well crafted
thought you could have fared better with more lines.
kind of reminded me of something.....especially after the ~1~...
that seems ....odd
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