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Old 11-26-2018, 09:36 AM   #11
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You hate us for no reason, one of us probably left your wife a lil loose
She said she wanted someone hung, all you could do was provide her with a noose

lol kinda cool, kinda predictable though

Im creative as fuck, your verses are dry as hell
Pull the out the blicky and have you getting a Dummy, Boy even if 69’s jail

nah far too simple for me

Im a legend mate while you on the other hand are one of the worst
Even with the gimmick last round, you didn’t Marvel anyone with your verse

missed for me tbh

I’m a colossus, your rhetoric’s just nonsense
Not a plot twist but it’s ironic that a Woke nigga is about to leave u unconscious

yeah I liked this one a lot conceptually

I’ve beaten everyone in this, you’ve got no notable victories just trashy wins
You’re a bunch of bitches obsessed with black dudes, those K’s could stand for Kardashians

lol nice idea again, definitely picked up towards the later end of your verse


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You monkeys support this chatter? It's Jungle Book w/ pimp flair
Niggas die, they get paid. Fat apes eatin' off the weight that the chimps bear

just okay

I triiiieeedddd to tell em: you don't want these hands to rattle ya nose
We'll slide up yellin and bring the Fade to Black Live like Metallica shows

kinda okay, kinda feels like an older idea revamped/twisted to make it applicable lol

The riots in Bmore? Basically a ride down the beach to OUR type of meet
Shit if Flacco won a ring, they'd have more dmg caused by uh-oh to his own street

straight

Fuck the sci-fi shit. You ain't got A Way Out, no save w/ the black card
So PLZ act hard. You'll be fit w/ 6 nigs in a sunken place in my backyard

okay

2 choices: drawn and quartered by Fords or hung w/ ur pants saggin.
Get out of line? Boy I'll treat u like ya mom & have u pick a branch, faggot.

just okay, felt a bit flat tbreal


I'm kinda tied on this one, Flacco line didn't do much for me, I enjoyed the Metal;lica line but it felt kinda.. done already? I know that's odd sounding but it just feels like a stale idea given a revamped twist to make it applicable to me. I dunno. Well hung was okay, woke nigga was nice, closer was nice. More of that please.

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